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Old 11-30-2005, 03:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Everyday it seems people are battered confused/
Stuck in they veiws it's not enough that they lose/
Society rioting hidin the truth of they dues...../
All this commercail sucess niggas get it confused/
Givin away balls & words for a new pair of shoes/
Who cares is it you? can you stare at the truth?/
So many muthafu.kas stay alive just to die..../
Survive just to lie almost die to try and get by/
Sacrificein the the truths for bentlys and coupes/
A house with many rooms and a way bigger roof/
Still remain gettin played media has no shame/
Lost of privicy feedin us through a frame...../
Knockin n*ggas off they axes fu*kin up just to gain/
Brain washed no change cuz they figure they can't/
While conservitives laugh on the way to the bank/
Gettin crumbs off the dollar thinkin you takin the cake/
when you like a girl with R.Kelly on a featuered tape/
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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SB have a go at battling fenix in my alter-ego tambos thread-Rap Battles
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 11-30-2005, 11:19 PM   #4 (permalink)
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To be honest not a lot of rap looks good on paper.
You need the beat, and a friggin lucky one at that, to make rap lyrics happen.
I didn't like the above, by the way.
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Old 11-30-2005, 11:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I guess it might be able to work with a tight beat........your spelling aint great lol
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Old 12-01-2005, 09:11 AM   #6 (permalink)
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good rap happens... it looks like you spen too much time on this. Also the thing is... its very one way street-ish... you have to conme up with new and inivative ways to convey meaning.... straight rhymes aren't going to do it. the lyrics are liner....

.................A
.................B
.................A
.................B

the thing about good rap is that it flows and words are mixed up turned around and back, stutter stepped... its cool and artistic and almost anti poetic. thats what im not seeing in your rap...

im seeing roses are red
violets are blue.
and so on.
change it up but i LOVE the theme.... most rap is about bitches and hoes and 9's on yo waist. i love seeing meaningful lyrics... especially with the kind of hold rap has on the youth at this point.
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Old 12-01-2005, 09:34 AM   #7 (permalink)
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most rap is about bitches and hoes and 9's on yo waist.
False.
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Old 12-02-2005, 08:38 AM   #8 (permalink)
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most popular rap? yes.
thats what sells... i take it you know about music... you know thats what sells.... the gangster lifestyle... you have to be kidding the MOST popular rap isnt about the falsified played out gangsta motif... underground rap... is beautiful.... heiruspecs... jedi mind tricks... **** like that.... i like alot... ****in citizen cope... good **** man.... BUT popular rap im afraid is dominated by the 50 cent's and the ****in east side boys of our time.
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Old 12-03-2005, 07:50 AM   #9 (permalink)
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most popular rap? yes.
thats what sells... i take it you know about music... you know thats what sells.... the gangster lifestyle... you have to be kidding the MOST popular rap isnt about the falsified played out gangsta motif... underground rap... is beautiful.... heiruspecs... jedi mind tricks... **** like that.... i like alot... ****in citizen cope... good **** man.... BUT popular rap im afraid is dominated by the 50 cent's and the ****in east side boys of our time.
Eminem doesn't do gangster rap, and he's one of the most famous rappers. He talks about his hardtimes with his wife and daughter, hell, one of his songs made me cry. I don't think all popular rap is gangster rap.
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Old 12-05-2005, 02:46 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Eminem doesn't do gangster rap, and he's one of the most famous rappers. He talks about his hardtimes with his wife and daughter, hell, one of his songs made me cry. I don't think all popular rap is gangster rap.
sorry, a bit off subject but an EMINEM SONG MADE YOU CRY? which one was it?
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