Who Likes This Song (dance, metal, show, quote)

Hype8 · 12-11-2005, 03:23 PM

Well you should see a lot of the stuff other people write who think they're so def at writing lyrics, but seriously its worse than what Green Day Fan wrote there. So it would be ok for a first try at rhyming. Practice makes perfect.

Green Day Rocks · 12-11-2005, 05:03 PM

well do i suck?

mosesandtherubberducky · 12-11-2005, 05:27 PM

100% suckage

TheBig3 · 12-11-2005, 05:49 PM

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Originally Posted by _LesPaul43_

Sucks

Thats about right, self affirming pro-female crap makes me want to drown myself in liquid carbonite steel.

Superficial emotions don't make good muci, or lyircs for that matter.

TheBig3 · 12-11-2005, 05:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Green Day Rocks

well do i suck?

No I'd just wgaer your young, to access what your porblem is I'd need to know alot of things, but heres a simple answer for now, Read and listen to the greats, look at what they do, and try to imagine why they havn't been eclipsed for over 30 years or so.

TrampInaTux · 12-12-2005, 03:39 PM

Green Day Rock I really wouldn't listen to madein NY and themouseandtherubberducky. even though that song weren't so good, it was a first try. I would listen to people like the TheBig3 and Hype8 who are actually helping you with your faults. That is the only way you will learn, not by losers telling you that you suck all the time. Stick with it and you will eventually become great.

Green Day Rocks · 12-24-2005, 07:21 AM

It sux dont it?

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Oh..I just realised that person was the person who wrote the song, well, to them..practice makes perfect.

That made no sense anyways i wrote it!

Green Day Rocks · 12-24-2005, 07:30 AM

okay i know i suck get more people to vote

TrampInaTux · 12-24-2005, 07:38 AM

There's not really any point in getting more people to vote-I would save yourself embarrassement and get going with a new song, and try to correct your faults instead of dwelling on this first attempt.

Green Day Rocks · 12-24-2005, 02:17 PM

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Originally Posted by madeinNY

Oh..I just realised that person was the person who wrote the song, well, to them..practice makes perfect.

that makes know sense and i made it

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12-11-2005, 03:23 PM	#11 (permalink)
Hype8 Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: california Posts: 191	Well you should see a lot of the stuff other people write who think they're so def at writing lyrics, but seriously its worse than what Green Day Fan wrote there. So it would be ok for a first try at rhyming. Practice makes perfect. __________________

12-11-2005, 05:27 PM	#13 (permalink)
mosesandtherubberducky butt say x Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: so i read the question as "Where YOU live" which was kinda funny instead of "Where you live" Posts: 1,649	100% suckage __________________ Can I have a youtube video for a sig? There's a thing that says "Wrap [YOUTUBE] tags around selected text"

12-24-2005, 07:30 AM	#18 (permalink)
Green Day Rocks Groupie Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In your closet...Go look! Posts: 28	okay i know i suck get more people to vote __________________ Highlight this---> even though u can't see it your friend and u will always have a strong friendship

12-11-2005, 05:03 PM	#12 (permalink)
Green Day Rocks Groupie Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In your closet...Go look! Posts: 28	well do i suck?

12-12-2005, 03:39 PM	#16 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Green Day Rock I really wouldn't listen to madein NY and themouseandtherubberducky. even though that song weren't so good, it was a first try. I would listen to people like the TheBig3 and Hype8 who are actually helping you with your faults. That is the only way you will learn, not by losers telling you that you suck all the time. Stick with it and you will eventually become great.

12-24-2005, 07:38 AM	#19 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	There's not really any point in getting more people to vote-I would save yourself embarrassement and get going with a new song, and try to correct your faults instead of dwelling on this first attempt.