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TrampInaTux 12-24-2005 06:00 AM

Take her home, son
 
You took your time said we had all day/
I threw away your food and blew the fire on the candle away/
Sorry was a word that you didn't say/
This was supposed to be a relationship not end easily/

Take her home, son/
Look what she's done, son/
she's had a few, son/
she's had a few and then some/

I'm frightened what my parents might think/
Rubbing and patting your back as you're leaning over the kitchen sink/
Take her home, son, she's had too much too drink/
And on the way home you're asleep and it gives me time to think/

Take her home, son/
Look what she's done, son/
she's had a few, son/
she's had a few and then some/

Fights in the past but never this bad/
Tears of our hate cloud the visions in our eyes of what we once had/
Nearly Christmas but hard to be glad/
When no-ones around you and the one you love doesn't love you back...

Take her home, son/
Look what she's done, son/
she's had a few, son/
she's had a few and then some/

TrampInaTux 12-28-2005 05:20 AM

I use that forward slash when I write music. I wouldn't say thats a bad thing with the song-you're looking at the lyrics, not the slashes after all...

madeinNY 12-28-2005 12:14 PM

This sounds like some kind of country song hobo...it lacks some kind of a sting though...

Shut up webbed toes.

right-track 12-28-2005 12:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WebZeppelin
The slashes ruin the entire song. In the immortal words of "somebody else who posts at these forums": Go play in the road, I'm sure the car's bumpers will welcome you.

I can think of a few slashes that would make an improvement to you...somewhere around the jugular, preferably.

Some one please ban this no-mark.

riseagainstrocks 12-28-2005 03:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track
I can think of a few slashes that would make an improvement to you...somewhere around the jugular, preferably.

friggin' awesome.

either/or 12-29-2005 01:26 AM

oh its not morning anymore

TrampInaTux 12-30-2005 05:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track
I can think of a few slashes that would make an improvement to you...somewhere around the jugular, preferably.

Some one please ban this no-mark.

:bowdown:

and madeinNY this isn't a country song-it's a very British Indie song. Looking back I can see where you got the country comment from. Maybe I need to improve on this a touch.

madeinNY 12-30-2005 08:58 AM

retouching never hurts ;) After all, that's why models are so beautiful. hehe

TrampInaTux 12-30-2005 09:00 AM

And retouching is also why you should never see the same prostitute twice.

madeinNY 12-30-2005 09:03 AM

Hahah yet another quote from you that is going in my sig.

But hey, if I liked country music this song would kick ass :D
I know...It's not country music.


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