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either/or 12-27-2005 05:05 PM

thats true alex that line does fit more than you can love at any age. soft rock eh. awesome. in another topic my song shall be completed soon and it will blow yall away. its about a conspiracy that katie holmes is not actually pregnant and that tom cruise is just making it up. for what purpose i cannot yet tell but the song explores tom's mischevious plan. its on acoustic guitar.

madeinNY 12-27-2005 05:07 PM

That sounds like a very interesting song, either/or. lol

either/or 12-27-2005 05:09 PM

heck yes.
you can see it in her face
in the quickening of her pace
why does she have to hide
and even if she tried
why does she have to lie
stuck in tom's broken arms forever
you evil ****ing scientologist
suck my fat c0cktologist

madeinNY 12-27-2005 05:11 PM

^^HAHHA!!! im litterally LOLing. thats brilliant

either/or 12-27-2005 05:11 PM

oh its gunna be brilliant. thankyou for your LOLing

madeinNY 12-27-2005 05:12 PM

*shuts eyes and nods* no prob.

Crazy Luv 12-27-2005 05:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by either/or
the bit where its like its bitter, its bitter after each bit and that the person is happy is the sweet is really good, i liked that. i can almost hear that in the song.

took the words right out of my mouth....

Quote:

Now that you're truely happy...or so you say. I can rest on a facade of your happiness. Rest meaning the pills will put me to sleep.
i think you should break this down



But none the less, i like this song

madeinNY 12-27-2005 05:25 PM

Thanks crazy :D

I think that since I want to leave the last line, I'm going to just say it as the music fades out..like not sing it, just say it.

(BTW...there is other songs from me I'd also apreciate a review for ;) no pressure)

either/or 12-27-2005 05:57 PM

yeah ill check em out. just wanted to say that. woot 100 posts. im on my way.

madeinNY 12-27-2005 06:00 PM

thanks either/or


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