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12-27-2005, 05:19 PM
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[[la de da diddy da]]
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: NY...duh.
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Not In My Cards
A/N: I know it seems like I wrote 3 songs today, but they were all written at different times and posted at one...so don't think I just wrote random crap down and posted it...also, only HELPFUL critisms will be accepted
 --- I've spent my days trying to make you laugh Trying to make you like me for who I am and not what you want or wish me to be and all I have to say after what you've done is... You think you're great You think you're fabulous You think you know what's what. The truth, mah daheer, is I'm Done I'm Done I'm Done. Done trying to make you laugh. Done trying to please you. To make you like me. You shouldn't have to make friends like you. With friends like you, mah daheer, enemies aren't neccasary. So I'm Done. (I'm Done, I'm Done.) **** Off (**** Off) I'm Me (I'm Me) Deal with it. Spending all your time trying to bend me But baby, I'm clad iron. So try all you must. But I'm not meant to falter to you. It's not in my cards. **** Off ma daheer.
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12-27-2005, 05:36 PM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
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this song is a rush of emotion. Music(beat) seems like it would be the strongest part in the song.
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12-27-2005, 05:37 PM
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[[la de da diddy da]]
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Yea, this song will depend on beat...I don't know if that's good or not, but oh well.
It's written about my "friend" Lacee who thinks I'm weird because of my orientation...and I was really pissed at her when I wrote this, that's why you're getting that rush effect.
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12-27-2005, 05:59 PM
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Don't think twice
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: A basement on the hill
Posts: 352
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soft rock again?
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Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation |
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12-27-2005, 10:29 PM
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Don't think twice
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: A basement on the hill
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heard? read. web zeppelin you seem to going around making alot of perverse comments in all these song writing forums. and have you seen better or are you just saying that to say something, seeing as most of the posts you've made in every single songwriting thread seem to be just there to....boost post count or draw attention.
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