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madeinNY 12-29-2005 09:00 PM

Untitled, Weird song.
 
This is a weird song I wrote that comes from listening to too much Paula Abdul and reading too much smut.
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Hey you,
Wanna know a little about me?
I'm the reason God created barbituates, hunneyyy
You know me now
Do ya like what ya hear?
How bout what ya see?
Do you wanna have some fun with me?
You hear things about the girl with the black eyeliner
You think inpure thoughts.
Do ya like what ya hear?
Like what ya see?
Wanna have some fun with me?
You'll be needing some of those pills God created for me

sleepy jack 12-29-2005 09:16 PM

In all honesty i think it sucks, it is typical popular music that i think is crap and singing about being a slut isn't something i'd be proud of.

madeinNY 12-29-2005 09:18 PM

Never said I was proud of it! lol I think it's **** too! I just think it would get some giggles.

Crazy Luv 12-29-2005 09:47 PM

yes, its obvious that you have been listening to too much paula abdul

madeinNY 12-29-2005 09:47 PM

Yea. lol. I ripped her off too. But it's not like I'm cutting a record with this song on it, so who cares?

sleepy jack 12-29-2005 09:50 PM

Originality is a trait of good song writing.
Its okay to be heavily influenced by someones writing.
But to the point where its a blatant rip-off is bad.

madeinNY 12-29-2005 09:51 PM

I really didn't take this song too seriously. It was meant for ****s and giggles.

sleepy jack 12-29-2005 09:55 PM

When you post a song in here it gets criticized, get over it, if you posted a song for us to laugh at you should of specified it was a joke and in my opinion that makes this thread pointless, because this song isn't that funny even if it is badly written.

madeinNY 12-29-2005 09:56 PM

Maybe we just don't share the same type of humor.

either/or 12-30-2005 01:42 AM

cut it out alex, its obvious the song was just a little bit of fun.


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