Untitled, Weird song.

madeinNY · 12-29-2005, 09:00 PM

This is a weird song I wrote that comes from listening to too much Paula Abdul and reading too much smut.
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Hey you,
Wanna know a little about me?
I'm the reason God created barbituates, hunneyyy
You know me now
Do ya like what ya hear?
How bout what ya see?
Do you wanna have some fun with me?
You hear things about the girl with the black eyeliner
You think inpure thoughts.
Do ya like what ya hear?
Like what ya see?
Wanna have some fun with me?
You'll be needing some of those pills God created for me

sleepy jack · 12-29-2005, 09:16 PM

In all honesty i think it sucks, it is typical popular music that i think is crap and singing about being a slut isn't something i'd be proud of.

madeinNY · 12-29-2005, 09:18 PM

Never said I was proud of it! lol I think it's **** too! I just think it would get some giggles.

Crazy Luv · 12-29-2005, 09:47 PM

yes, its obvious that you have been listening to too much paula abdul

madeinNY · 12-29-2005, 09:47 PM

Yea. lol. I ripped her off too. But it's not like I'm cutting a record with this song on it, so who cares?

sleepy jack · 12-29-2005, 09:50 PM

Originality is a trait of good song writing.
Its okay to be heavily influenced by someones writing.
But to the point where its a blatant rip-off is bad.

madeinNY · 12-29-2005, 09:51 PM

I really didn't take this song too seriously. It was meant for ****s and giggles.

sleepy jack · 12-29-2005, 09:55 PM

When you post a song in here it gets criticized, get over it, if you posted a song for us to laugh at you should of specified it was a joke and in my opinion that makes this thread pointless, because this song isn't that funny even if it is badly written.

madeinNY · 12-29-2005, 09:56 PM

Maybe we just don't share the same type of humor.

either/or · 12-30-2005, 01:42 AM

cut it out alex, its obvious the song was just a little bit of fun.

12-29-2005, 09:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Untitled, Weird song. This is a weird song I wrote that comes from listening to too much Paula Abdul and reading too much smut. --- Hey you, Wanna know a little about me? I'm the reason God created barbituates, hunneyyy You know me now Do ya like what ya hear? How bout what ya see? Do you wanna have some fun with me? You hear things about the girl with the black eyeliner You think inpure thoughts. Do ya like what ya hear? Like what ya see? Wanna have some fun with me? You'll be needing some of those pills God created for me __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-29-2005, 09:18 PM	#3 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Never said I was proud of it! lol I think it's **** too! I just think it would get some giggles. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-29-2005, 09:47 PM	#5 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Yea. lol. I ripped her off too. But it's not like I'm cutting a record with this song on it, so who cares? __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-29-2005, 09:51 PM	#7 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	I really didn't take this song too seriously. It was meant for ****s and giggles. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-29-2005, 09:56 PM	#9 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Maybe we just don't share the same type of humor. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-29-2005, 09:47 PM	#4 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	yes, its obvious that you have been listening to too much paula abdul

12-30-2005, 01:42 AM	#10 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	cut it out alex, its obvious the song was just a little bit of fun. __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation