Ella Jean (quote, song, Hang)

sleepy jack · 01-10-2006, 05:57 PM

Well, if it was for ella why bother posting it on the forum? I swear you just post songs for the sake of posting them not cause you want them fixed or help on them or anything.

madeinNY · 01-10-2006, 06:04 PM

No, I like to get reviews. Most I want suggestions and whatnot on.

I posted this because I wanted to see what you all thought.

creepinson · 01-10-2006, 07:12 PM

if its as personal and important as you say it is, keep it to your self

if you wanna get some songs done to vent whatever youve got on ur chest, get, try to get into music, or like have a band or something, fine... send us a post, well try to help you out

personally i would be offended if you wrote a personal song for me and showed it to the whole world... its contrived stuff anyway... if it made this chick happy woopty doo. wait until you write a song for yourself... and then we might give a crit that you can use

Crazy Luv · 01-10-2006, 07:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mosesandtherubberducky

I'm Moses, how else?

12 year olds are in short naive to the world and don't care. They care more about playing games then about sex and money. They can be happy about seeing something that older people take for granted. Right now I would normally say grow up but that totally defeats the purpose of my views. Act your age.

you're talking like you met every ****ing 12 yr. old in the world

creepinson · 01-10-2006, 07:25 PM

nope hes talking like he met THIS 12 year old...

whoah i just read your song for the first time... i found the spam more interesting... dude now i see what theyre talking about....

btw... if that song was supposed to cheer someone up... you prolly coulda done a clown dance or something... cuz i dont even know you... and hearing about all your little problems makes me wanna die... yes right here.... right now

madeinNY · 01-10-2006, 07:27 PM

Yea I know, really, Crazy. ;]

I am nothing like the kids you descirbe in your posts, and frankly I don't wish to be.

Cripson, I write tons of songs for myself, check out this forum

Crazy Luv · 01-10-2006, 07:31 PM

^sorry to spam, but Lex, clean out your messeges, gotta send you something.

madeinNY · 01-10-2006, 07:32 PM

K just did it

creepinson · 01-10-2006, 07:36 PM

the fact that you write plenty of songs for yourself doesnt make up for the fact that your sharing something that is supposed to be completely private with us...

if its gonna be something personal... atleast dont talk about it... we have enough problems of our own

and lol dude crazy luv... you dont need to be worryin about spam on this thread man

madeinNY · 01-10-2006, 07:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by creepinson

nope hes talking like he met THIS 12 year old...

whoah i just read your song for the first time... i found the spam more interesting... dude now i see what theyre talking about....

btw... if that song was supposed to cheer someone up... you prolly coulda done a clown dance or something... cuz i dont even know you... and hearing about all your little problems makes me wanna die... yes right here.... right now

something over the internet makes you wanna die?

you and that guy who killed himself over myspace should hang in the afterlife, y'know what im saying?

01-10-2006, 06:04 PM	#62 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	No, I like to get reviews. Most I want suggestions and whatnot on. I posted this because I wanted to see what you all thought. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-10-2006, 07:27 PM	#66 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Yea I know, really, Crazy. ;] I am nothing like the kids you descirbe in your posts, and frankly I don't wish to be. Cripson, I write tons of songs for myself, check out this forum __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-10-2006, 07:32 PM	#68 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	K just did it __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-10-2006, 07:12 PM	#63 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	if its as personal and important as you say it is, keep it to your self if you wanna get some songs done to vent whatever youve got on ur chest, get, try to get into music, or like have a band or something, fine... send us a post, well try to help you out personally i would be offended if you wrote a personal song for me and showed it to the whole world... its contrived stuff anyway... if it made this chick happy woopty doo. wait until you write a song for yourself... and then we might give a crit that you can use

01-10-2006, 07:25 PM	#65 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	nope hes talking like he met THIS 12 year old... whoah i just read your song for the first time... i found the spam more interesting... dude now i see what theyre talking about.... btw... if that song was supposed to cheer someone up... you prolly coulda done a clown dance or something... cuz i dont even know you... and hearing about all your little problems makes me wanna die... yes right here.... right now

01-10-2006, 07:31 PM	#67 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	^sorry to spam, but Lex, clean out your messeges, gotta send you something.

01-10-2006, 07:36 PM	#69 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	the fact that you write plenty of songs for yourself doesnt make up for the fact that your sharing something that is supposed to be completely private with us... if its gonna be something personal... atleast dont talk about it... we have enough problems of our own and lol dude crazy luv... you dont need to be worryin about spam on this thread man