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Old 01-14-2006, 05:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Wink Run wit it (Freestyle)

no half assin or draggin slow when i'm rappin
I mash fast cause i'm on tha go no destaction/
kid of hip hop known to flip and rip hot
known from this spot to the tip of his block/
i'm a solider you should hear tha chorus
learned how to spit from tha niggas before us/
fliped it a lil bit made it more us......
don't be aginst it's best to be for us..../
some of these dudes can spit tha rest of you bore us/
no time for these losers I disrupt these bastards
plus I talk like tha truest spit up disaters.../
Back from the future f*ck a savage.....
this is grade A music with a touch of magic/
I stay on my game cause it's niggas hatein
to tha point of no return tha kid can't be faded/
from tha ground floor up i just elevate it....
Daddy war bucks you can't replace it...../
I emurst from tha speakers burst ya tweakers
i''m everything you need f*ck a feature/
If you don't feel it then f*ck it......
just know you can't touch it....../
I spit it like it's nothin you don't want somthin/
It's time for tha redemtion of hip hop (tick tock)
A menice with rendition of this lock (It's hot)/
Nah i'm bringin a set back in fact.....
What i'm really bringin is deplth back yes thats/
Tha beginin of things I always come with tha flow
weather it's high or it's low it's comprised of a soul/
I'm not a rapper you can call me tha MC....
same class as Eminem, Big L, and Jay-z prase me/
A lot of these rappers be lazy thats crazy....
Everything I see crystal clear and not hazey/
tell you tha truth i'm penacillen on tha beat
help everything come along so you feel it in tha streets/
Killin peelin all tha weak what you gettin is tha heat
And I do till I die yeah thats a nasty feat..../
and you can change ya belief but i'm tha truth
from tha troops in tha streets to my feet hit tha booth/
If you feel me you feel me if you don't then don't!!
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Old 01-14-2006, 06:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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the only thing worse than a bad rap song is a bad rap song with no content other than egotistical bragging about how "gansta" you are. Spelling every word wrong doesn't make you "hardcore", it just makes you sound like an idiot.
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Old 01-14-2006, 09:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
Don't think twice
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how many versions of this shi t did this **** put in here. piss off you wank
Painstaking devotion and love
Surrendered to self preservation
From others who care for themselves
A blindness that touches perfection
But hurts just like anything else

Isolation, isolation, isolation
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Old 01-14-2006, 10:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
a l'amou fou pou tout
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Originally Posted by jibber
Spelling every word wrong doesn't make you "hardcore", it just makes you sound like an idiot.
he was spelling most of every word right, so....

but i agree, he was spitting too much about how tyte he is. i dont think its bad, but it aint great either.
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Old 01-15-2006, 06:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
you are freakin out, man
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now that i have myself calm and collected, i must remark that any song which involves both the naming off of other artists (rap artists especially) and the words daddy warbucks is in all senses and tenses... shit
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Old 01-16-2006, 04:41 AM   #6 (permalink)
that's my war face.
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I thought it was good. A bit pointless, and I don't see that you freestyled it. I think you might have told a little lie there. But I think it's alright-maybe you should have used your noggin' a bit and posted it in the Rap Battles thread-talking about how good you are is surely something that shouldn't be used in a song, it is more of a rap battle type of thing.
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Old 01-30-2006, 05:26 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Ahhh thats cute

it is what it is Read my sig Children

and in no part of the title does it say song
I do as I please Jr's
thanks for tha feed though
good job i'm postin more ish for you
to hate on.
keep up tha good work.

(Oh) and being so close to my nutz isn't recomened

(Oops) spelled some words wrong (ha ha ha)
you people are funny.
If you feel me you feel me if you don't then don't!!
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