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01-16-2006, 03:09 AM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
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Dont want to leave
I know i said i wouldnt Please dont cry Dont try to follow Provoked me to push you Get the hell away We were great together But im not sure if you actually want this The need to think is overwhelming Its not me its you But i had to lie I dont want the truth to unnecessarily cause you the pain its causing me My mind goes blink you stand there expecting more from me cant give you anymore i have to get out of here you storm out the door after me you scream "dont you dare walk away from me!" i ignore you and head to my car just as im about to get in, you stop me by saying "please dont leave" in a voice i cannot bear i shut the door and slowly make my way back to you i have to look in your eyes for a minute to tell if you're for real Try to put aside the tears streaming down your face You say "please, dont leave me", once again What, just for the heck of it Im about to say something i'd regret but think better of it and ask a question of my own "why shouldnt i?!" you just stare at me for a second or two you're about to say something but dont finally you say "because i love you" im dumfounded for a minute or two cant help but to have some doubts i know you werent expecting the smile that graced my face you see, ive been waiting for you to say that ummm....yea... |
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01-16-2006, 03:11 AM
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Don't think twice
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: A basement on the hill
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some of it is a bit typical. maybe question it a bit more, question his motives and why and all that. but then again hey i aint no great songwriter.
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Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation |
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01-16-2006, 03:15 AM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
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no no, im taking all the reviews i can get. good ideas, im working on it.
how about this... i have a secret place Somewhere i can go to just get away from everything in tow it helps me calm down when im having a fit or stops the tears from flowing when things arent...blah this is my lil sisters poem & shes asking for help, but i dont know what to tell her, any ideas? orrrr this one... Im walking home from work Alone in these cold streets Suddenly the streetlights turn off And i hear footsteps lingering behind me I turn around but no ones in sight Must of been my imagination continue on my way An uncomfortable feeling comes upon me Unknown arms grab hold of me in a firm grip They pull me into the shadows never to be seen again or maybe... Must of been my imagination continue on my way An uncomfortable feeling comes upon me An unknown creature jumps out of the shadows After a fit of panic, i figure out its just my puppy one more... Remember when you said you'll always be in reach... how am i to reach you now? Remember when you said the limit for us is imperishable as of now, that thought is convicted I would be more understanding if it were an accident but you knew the risks and took that chance Did the thought of our future even cross your mind when you went with your buddies to do your thing When we were together you always had something smart to say so what are you referring now? Cant quite perceive what you're trying to tell me you see...i cant hear through your casket  im just going to stop trying for tonight
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01-16-2006, 04:11 AM
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Don't think twice
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yeah mugging and **** can happen is ny. but not in the sunny land of gold coast australia
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Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation |
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01-16-2006, 09:42 PM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
Posts: 355
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ahhh, aussie.
 i wanna take a trip there. Is there any place in australia similar to NY, you know tall buildings, busy streets, nosiy, always something happening...etc. etc. so im guessing rawking is a...good thing...??? |
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01-16-2006, 10:55 PM
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Don't think twice
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