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01-18-2006, 06:31 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Freeskier
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople...
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putting off doing work, so I wrote something
yeah so I was bored so I wrote a song. Just a quick one, but I kind of like where it's going. I have some reservations about it, but I'll let you guys tell me what you think first.
This bed of nails I’ve Grown accustomed to Lately can’t render The quiet it once did. Conscious still, I feel a pang of sensitivity, A rude awakening from The blissful dullness of dormancy. These nails after so long, Begin to lose their brilliance, A fading bitterness so Obvious and caustic. A meddling intrusion into my unchanging apathy. And I recalibrate, Trying desperately to regain Some sense of the insensibility, Even a momentary lapse Into a torpor resembling that which Once could be a mendacity of peace.
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01-18-2006, 06:46 PM | #3 (permalink) |
I love Puck
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I like it....one thing that i've never realized is why i never see just any simple songs on this website....simple songs are good sometimes too
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01-18-2006, 07:20 PM | #4 (permalink) |
Freeskier
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^meh, i just have more fun with songs that aren't so direct, they tend to bore me.
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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road. William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass. HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER |
01-18-2006, 08:37 PM | #5 (permalink) |
I love Puck
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Fair enough and i give you kudos for not just going the easy route....but see you have the skill to make a song like this....some others i cant go as far as to say so
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