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Old 01-28-2006, 08:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Mornings With Jilly And Jack

Mornings With Jilly and Jack

I wanna take back mornings with Jack
I wanna live in last year.
Cheers to the past.
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.

It was something inside her that died long ago
And if it happens again
It'll surely be gone for good.
So...

She'll risk it
He'll fail her
And he won't even mail her.
('n' it'll surely be gone for good.)

I wanna live in last year
Cheers to the past...
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.

Silly Jilly
and old Jacky Mac
To hell with their
"We'll always have Paris"
pact.

I wanna take back mornings with Jack
I wanna live in last year.
Cheers to the past.
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.

Sing her a song,
and she'll stay a while.
Don't let her down, this time, Jack.
Make her a pact.

I wanna live in last year!
Cheers to the past!
And mornings with Jilly and Jack!
(And mornings with Jilly and Jack...)
And mornings with Jilly and Jack.
(And mornings with Jilly and Jack)

x3
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Old 01-28-2006, 09:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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aww sweetie, i really liked that song.. it was really good.. now we need to gear up a band.. woo

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Old 01-28-2006, 09:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Aw thank you muchly, and definatly. hehe

No critiscm? :]
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Old 01-28-2006, 09:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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silly jilly annoy's me.. but thats about it..
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Old 01-28-2006, 09:52 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hm...what else rhymes with Jilly that could be used as a name?
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Old 01-28-2006, 09:54 PM   #6 (permalink)
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thats just it my dear... stop trying so hard to rhyme things.. after a while sometimes it can get annoying.. not everything has to fit like perfect. actaclly most of the best songs i've heard don't have that rhyming stuff..
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Old 01-28-2006, 09:56 PM   #7 (permalink)
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but with the beat I have in my head the rhyme goes better...
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Old 01-28-2006, 09:58 PM   #8 (permalink)
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i dunno well i get it.. but words liek billy willy.. i dunno they go with it.. but yea i think i hate most rhymes anyways.. it took me till this year to acually sit down and write a rhyming poem.. and i hate them..
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Old 01-28-2006, 09:59 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Aye then, thanks Sab :]
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Old 01-31-2006, 08:51 PM   #10 (permalink)
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to me it just kept saying the same thing over and over again and also, it seems like one of the songs that the music is more focused on than the words.
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