Music Banter

Go Back   Music Banter > Artists Corner > Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
Register Blogging Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
Welcome to Music Banter Forum! Make sure to register - it's free and very quick! You have to register before you can post and participate in our discussions with over 70,000 other registered members. After you create your free account, you will be able to customize many options, you will have the full access to over 1,100,000 posts.

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 02-12-2006, 02:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
They call me Tundra Boy
 
DontRunMeOver's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In your linen cupboard.
Posts: 1,166
Default Hmmm, what could this one be about?

Break the Silence:

Carve out
A pattern
In my back
With nailmarks
(x2)

Trembled tension
Pulses pounding
Forget about
Our surroundings
(x2)

No words, no prose
Both my hands in your clothes
Feeling how fast your heart is beating
Prone pleasure on your back
Imitate a heart attack
Waking up the street with gale-force breathing

Break the silence
Break the silence

Trembled tension
Pulses pounding
Forget about
Our surroundings
(x2)

Warm bed, thin walls
Noises that you can’t control
Everyone can hear you instinct screaming
Prone pleasure on your back
Imitate a heart attack
Waking up the street with gale-force breathing

Break the silence
Break the silence
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Katyppfan View Post
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
DontRunMeOver is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 02:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
Freeskier
 
jibber's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople...
Posts: 1,536
Default

about sex, obviously. It's good, well written, and flows well, but I'm not crazy about it. Songs about sex are great, but personally, without any mention of any emotions tied to it, the song just doesn't interest me. It could be that the song is about sex being the only important thing between two people, but in that situation, there are circumstances that have resulted in that type of relationship. Good writing, but the subject, as it is, just doesn't interest me that much, who knows, maybe it's because i'm a girl.
__________________
What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways


Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER
jibber is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 03:03 PM   #3 (permalink)
angel of tragic days
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 924
Default

I on the other hand rather enjoyed that. The way it flow's the way you can picture how its happening so clear, the nails on the back everything.. seems intense. It works well with my mind well reading it for a few reasons.. i have a very intense imaginenation and can picture things so perfectly, more so sexual things, so because of this i think the song/poem is great just fits perfectly but where its sex related it wouldn't say its "sex", "making love" or anything of any romantic nature.. more so... yea you know what i'm saying
explosions-in-my-pants is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 03:56 PM   #4 (permalink)
Freeskier
 
jibber's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople...
Posts: 1,536
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by explosions-in-my-pants
I on the other hand rather enjoyed that. The way it flow's the way you can picture how its happening so clear, the nails on the back everything.. seems intense. It works well with my mind well reading it for a few reasons.. i have a very intense imaginenation and can picture things so perfectly, more so sexual things, so because of this i think the song/poem is great just fits perfectly but where its sex related it wouldn't say its "sex", "making love" or anything of any romantic nature.. more so... yea you know what i'm saying
Yeah, I said it was well written, but that it didn't interest me. His use of imagery is great, and it flows nicely, but for me to like a song there has to be more substance to it. And just out of curiosity, what the hell were you talking about when you said "but where its sex related it wouldn't say its "sex", "making love" or anything of any romantic nature.. "?
__________________
What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways


Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER
jibber is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 04:00 PM   #5 (permalink)
angel of tragic days
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 924
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by jibber
Yeah, I said it was well written, but that it didn't interest me. His use of imagery is great, and it flows nicely, but for me to like a song there has to be more substance to it. And just out of curiosity, what the hell were you talking about when you said "but where its sex related it wouldn't say its "sex", "making love" or anything of any romantic nature.. "?
****ing.. there is a difference.. like with music "sex" falls in many different types.. that song to me seems to really have nothing to do with any sexual desire to actually want some or anything romantic with that person.. more so just wants to have a intense fuck...

you know this is what i meant..
explosions-in-my-pants is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 04:02 PM   #6 (permalink)
isfckingdead
 
sleepy jack's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2004
Posts: 18,969
Default

Last time I checked sex had one meaning. Something can be sexual and not be sex, but something being sex is sex. So if a music is about sex, then its about having sex not something else.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by METALLICA89 View Post
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
sleepy jack is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 04:05 PM   #7 (permalink)
Freeskier
 
jibber's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople...
Posts: 1,536
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by explosions-in-my-pants
****ing.. there is a difference.. like with music "sex" falls in many different types.. that song to me seems to really have nothing to do with any sexual desire to actually want some or anything romantic with that person.. more so just wants to have a intense fuck...

you know this is what i meant..
uhh, no, I really didn't know what you meant. Sex us sex, it doesn't have to be a "romantic" or "emotional" experience. Most people would agree that it's pretty straightforward.
__________________
What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways


Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER
jibber is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 04:07 PM   #8 (permalink)
angel of tragic days
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 924
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Crowquill
Last time I checked sex had one meaning. Something can be sexual and not be sex, but something being sex is sex. So if a music is about sex, then its about having sex not something else.
yes clearly.. but what i'm saying is sex, making love, ****ing, and many more are all different.. sex can be just sex yes.. but there are more then one type of "sex" to fall into it.. this is what i got from the song.. that it seems like fucking out of all the types i know it could be.. TO ME!
explosions-in-my-pants is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 06:16 PM   #9 (permalink)
Groupie
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: New Jersey
Posts: 7
Default

good song?
Skuroccer9 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-12-2006, 07:01 PM   #10 (permalink)
Freeskier
 
jibber's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople...
Posts: 1,536
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by explosions-in-my-pants
yes clearly.. but what i'm saying is sex, making love, ****ing, and many more are all different.. sex can be just sex yes.. but there are more then one type of "sex" to fall into it.. this is what i got from the song.. that it seems like fucking out of all the types i know it could be.. TO ME!
alright....calm down. I was just wondering why you were talking like you were saying something completely different than I was. If you'd read my post, you would have known that I pretty much just said the exact same thing you did. Mind you, I wasn't angry when I was explaining it. This seems to be a topic that get's you very upset. Is there something you might like to get off your chest? Perhaps talking to a counsellor would help.
__________________
What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways


Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER
jibber is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Similar Threads
  • hmmm, The Lounge Forum, 6 replies
  • Hmmm Tight?, Introductions Forum, 8 replies
  • hmmm..., The Lounge Forum, 33 replies



2003-2019 Advameg, Inc.

SEO by vBSEO 3.5.2 ©2010, Crawlability, Inc.