im back!!! its called of fire
 

Of Fire (really rough)
------------------------------
Last time I checked
I was the one with tears in my eyes
And something worth fighting for
Because these trenches can’t protect
The graces I’ve already declined
And now there’s no more I can stand
I’m sorry, but I crossed the line

I can see the difference
Between a mistake and a lie
And although I know ill never see you again
At least you don’t have to see why
As I flee from the fight
the fire fades from my eyes

I’ve left nothing for you but my pity
And a reason to think of me

When there’s nothing more than pity to hold on to
And it rots your finger tips, and you hold on to
Nothing more
I’ve given you my fear of pain
I’ve failed you
And that is why, dear, you'll never
see your father again
--------------------------------

be harsh, its all good

It's ok abit confusing to me. You kinda have to read it over and over again to get it! But other than that its good!

^Thats why it's good, I like songs that offer more and more each time you read over it.