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Old 03-08-2006, 01:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
you are freakin out, man
 
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Default im back!!! its called of fire

Of Fire (really rough)
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Last time I checked
I was the one with tears in my eyes
And something worth fighting for
Because these trenches canít protect
The graces Iíve already declined
And now thereís no more I can stand
Iím sorry, but I crossed the line

I can see the difference
Between a mistake and a lie
And although I know ill never see you again
At least you donít have to see why
As I flee from the fight
the fire fades from my eyes

Iíve left nothing for you but my pity
And a reason to think of me

When thereís nothing more than pity to hold on to
And it rots your finger tips, and you hold on to
Nothing more
Iíve given you my fear of pain
Iíve failed you
And that is why, dear, you'll never
see your father again
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be harsh, its all good
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Old 03-08-2006, 03:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It's ok abit confusing to me. You kinda have to read it over and over again to get it! But other than that its good!
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Old 03-09-2006, 12:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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^Thats why it's good, I like songs that offer more and more each time you read over it.
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