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Old 03-31-2006, 11:57 PM   #21 (permalink)
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Just those two words....hmph
& why it gotta be black ppl huh?!
I'm sure hes refering to the "gansta" mtv hip-hop stereotype that you seem to enforce with these generic, typical, unoriginal etc, lyrics you constantly post. Its these annoying "Yo, Im a bling-bling king, check out my silver pistol gold coated bullets I use to it shoot at the servants of the man, who come too near my grill where I teach my hoe whos the man" or "Check out my humps let me shake my booty in your face" lyricism, thats a problem and its not bad he said black people, I mean cmon whats fifty cent, chingy, beyonce white?

I love how you single out that one statement and made it seem racist, when really it wasn't at all, he was pointing out a flaw in your writing.

Also its not that hard to type out "cause" instead of "cuz" Anyway, the song seems like the typical MTV hip-hop writing, same ole' metaphors. Also, your vocabulary is ordinary and overused, I see it everywhere. Don't like it, and I apologize if this statement came off as racist, im tired, sweaty and sore and need sleep.
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Old 04-01-2006, 12:57 AM   #22 (permalink)
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I still wonder why he had to say black people, why he cant just say people.
I only use "cuz" & stuff like that once in a while. But those songs I put were different, I copied the original lyrics from somewhere online, then altered them into the way I wanted them to be. Didn’t change the cuz or the apostrophes in the place of letters. Don’t see the need to.
No it’s not hard to type out cause instead of cuz, but that doesn’t mean the people gotta. That doesn’t make them lazy or whatever you might say.
But that’s the way the words are sounded out when the people sing it or rap it. For common example durr & there do not sound the same. If you don’t like this type of music, fine, but don’t hate a song because of how words are pronounced/spelled, durr & there still mean the same damn thing.
If I thought he was racist, I would have said something, I was just asking a fucking question.
Your vocabulary is ordinary and overused Well I’m not one of those people who’s gonna say some big ass words & try to sound like something I’m not. So if that makes my vocabulary ordinary & overused, then chyea with that.
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Old 04-01-2006, 02:31 AM   #23 (permalink)
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Didn't like the song. I like my lyrics with a bit of spark, and that had none. And anyway, if you are going to say people are lazy for using the word cuz when you use cause that is just plain stupid. Cause is just a shortened down version of because, so that must mean you are lazy to. By the way, the guy weren't being racist. You should get over yourself.
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Old 04-01-2006, 04:06 AM   #24 (permalink)
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oh no i was being racist. mwahahahaha black people murdered my wife!
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Old 04-01-2006, 04:07 AM   #25 (permalink)
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Well now it looks like we can't win the argument...
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Old 04-01-2006, 04:07 AM   #26 (permalink)
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I said i didnt think you were being racist!
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Old 04-01-2006, 05:21 AM   #27 (permalink)
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its okay. I believe you.
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Old 04-01-2006, 11:10 PM   #28 (permalink)
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I still wonder why he had to say black people, why he cant just say people.
I only use "cuz" & stuff like that once in a while. But those songs I put were different, I copied the original lyrics from somewhere online, then altered them into the way I wanted them to be. Didnít change the cuz or the apostrophes in the place of letters. Donít see the need to.
No itís not hard to type out cause instead of cuz, but that doesnít mean the people gotta. That doesnít make them lazy or whatever you might say.
But thatís the way the words are sounded out when the people sing it or rap it. For common example durr & there do not sound the same. If you donít like this type of music, fine, but donít hate a song because of how words are pronounced/spelled, durr & there still mean the same damn thing.
If I thought he was racist, I would have said something, I was just asking a fucking question.
Your vocabulary is ordinary and overused Well Iím not one of those people whoís gonna say some big ass words & try to sound like something Iím not. So if that makes my vocabulary ordinary & overused, then chyea with that.

Then that was a stupid question, how often do you see a white person doing that pathetic excuse for rap on MTV about bling bling with the same vocabulary as the talentless corporate tool before him?

Another thing, vocabulary is a key thing to a song if its the same as all stuff in radio-rotation its going to be a huge turn off. Vocabulary helps make a song colorful and what the hell is chyea?
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Old 04-03-2006, 06:53 PM   #29 (permalink)
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chyea = alright or yea, you could kinda guess that if you read it right. not hard.

the key to a song is the flow to it. Exactly though, vocabulary used helps make a song colorful. but the vocabulary doesnt have to be perfect, or proper.

you sound so fucking racist, its not funny(even if you aint ****ing meaning to). It aint about number. i was just saying he didnt have to say a color. but why you making a big fucking deal about this. The person i was talking to said he understood. now whats up with you.
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Old 04-03-2006, 06:57 PM   #30 (permalink)
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So, i'm making a big deal out of it, even though you're equally doing it? I'm making a big deal out of it because you replied to my post and thats pretty pathetic if the "key to the song" is flow, because well I for one try to make my song have multiple "keys" as opposed to one strong point. Anoth thing how is saying black person racist? I'd also like for you to point out how im "sounding so fucking racist", because I really don't see how i'm being racist.
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