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creepinson 03-21-2006 03:59 PM

still trying to figure out a title
 
Hey I've been trying to write a bit more lately and this is what I got. I'm open (really open) to suggestions for titles so any ideas are appreciated
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So shall we let these dogs lie?
Or shoot them while they sleep?
It feels as if the mistrust
and the disgust
Is worth avoiding some bites
And some blood

Nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to run

you left me a fear in the streets
a danger in the home
and your only companion
as you proclaim youre alone
And now those dying dogs howl
at more than the sky

nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to die

a sweet and savage siren song
the deceitful salvage
of a long dead threat
deny your father
with brittle lies
while our fair lady
spoils your goodbyes
with her debts

ive found myself a reason to run, to die
to forget my misfortunes
dont forget to give her a kiss tonight
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ideas for titles?
crits?
its all good

angel18 03-22-2006 02:11 AM

Ok I honestly can't understand this at all. Please explain?

creepinson 03-22-2006 04:53 AM

sorry youre gonna have to be a bit more specific

Crashing Sun 03-22-2006 09:01 AM

how about "fido plays dead for real" of course that may just be wishful thinking

angel18 03-22-2006 12:49 PM

k I keep reading this and each time I can't figure out what it's about?

creepinson 03-22-2006 01:14 PM

its about trying to overlook your morals so that you can get to what you want, and then finally understanding that its not worth it in the end, because if something seems to good to be true, it probably is. Then theres the last little bit which is sorta about being able to accept the fact that you cant get what you want and others can

angel18 03-22-2006 01:19 PM

k now I understand!


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