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tcktrc 04-08-2006 08:23 AM

I Am Never Alone
 
Live! It’s time to rise. And I’m not sure what to say for all these days all blend together. Take all that I am. And rebuild. Die! And forget my words. This now is what I hoped for. And I walk on your grave sinner. You said that I would fall first. Liar.



the style is Ion Dissonance esque chaos. comments? critiques?

angel18 04-08-2006 11:45 AM

it's good but too short

sleepy jack 04-08-2006 04:43 PM

It is short, but I don't see why short is bad. Its very good, twould be cool if it was extended a bit.

jibber 04-09-2006 03:22 AM

it's incredibly hard to judge this song without knowing what it's going to be set to. If you don't have some really good music to put this to, it's not gonna be enough. on the flip side, it could be a great way to showcase some really good music you've written.


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