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Old 04-08-2006, 08:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I Am Never Alone

Live! Itís time to rise. And Iím not sure what to say for all these days all blend together. Take all that I am. And rebuild. Die! And forget my words. This now is what I hoped for. And I walk on your grave sinner. You said that I would fall first. Liar.

the style is Ion Dissonance esque chaos. comments? critiques?
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Old 04-08-2006, 11:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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it's good but too short
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Old 04-08-2006, 04:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It is short, but I don't see why short is bad. Its very good, twould be cool if it was extended a bit.
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Old 04-09-2006, 03:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
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it's incredibly hard to judge this song without knowing what it's going to be set to. If you don't have some really good music to put this to, it's not gonna be enough. on the flip side, it could be a great way to showcase some really good music you've written.
What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
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Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

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