I'm thinking about it
 

I'm thinking bout going home
Maybe you would like to join me
A girl like you shouldn't be alone
A guy like me should get in for free
What's your price, love? Really that much?
Sorry darling I ain't got enough
Maybe we should watch TV instead
Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom

I'm thinking bout undressing
I'll pull down your skirt love no messing
Bad girls like you should be taught a lesson
My wife will be home soon so no carressing
What, you don't want to? You don't have a choice
I'll only be 2 minutes just keep down your voice
Then you can go home and you won't say a word
Cos slappers like you, no, they don't get heard




Only 2 verses so far then, but what do you all think at the moment? Any ideas for a third verse?

i like it. flow is nice! i haven't any ideas at the moment to help!

i like this one too. hmph, doing a good job. but i dont like these lines in the 1st stanza...
Maybe we should watch TV instead
Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom

The 'room' in the bedroom line is supposed to be echoed out. It works, trust me.

...riiiiiiiiight. well for now, unless i hear it myself, i still stick with my opinion.


well off to ****ing school, oh the joy...