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Old 04-11-2006, 11:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Incessant whinings of a teenager disillusioned
Think of two emotions and then we'll try to fuse them
Brain child of the enemy misguided I'm sure you'll agree
Fool me into bed fool me in that bed in your head
(ah la la la la)

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Oh love me love me love Yes/No
Oh love me love me love Yes/No

Complicated feelings of a woman with a tragic loss
We'll buy the love from you but you ask us at what cost
Love child of the enemy delve into her mind and you'll see
Destroy her with your passion take her heart and pass it on
(ah la la la la)

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Oh love me love me love Yes/No
Oh love me love me love Yes/No



Only 2 verses so far and I promised I would lay off the complex songs but this one was to hard to resist. New concepts mixed with old ideas I've had about the song I want to write about my Dad.
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Old 04-11-2006, 01:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The only problem I really have with it is "Oh love me love me love Yes/No". If you say it out loud would it be "Oh love me love me love yes slash no"? or just "yes no". Either way it doesn't seem to work.
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Old 04-11-2006, 01:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It's yes/no and it works, I've tried it out. This song sounds pretty dam good when sung.
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Old 04-11-2006, 01:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Well thanks for clearing that up, I like it.
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Old 04-11-2006, 01:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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how is it cleared up? *confused*
it's written once more just like in the song..
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Old 04-11-2006, 01:56 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The only problem I had was if he had trouble singing it, and seeing as he doesn't. Its cleared up.
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Old 04-11-2006, 01:58 PM   #7 (permalink)
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aahhaa
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Old 04-12-2006, 03:27 AM   #8 (permalink)
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well the chorus sucks balls. But anyways, the rest of it is not to bad.
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