Sarah (bling)

Crazy Luv · 04-12-2006, 05:54 PM

Sarah
She's climbing up the stairs to the goal
Burning herself against every step she takes
You see, the goal wasn’t chosen on her own
It was a sacrifice like everything else she makes
She looks steady but really she's stumbling
And she can’t seem to find her landing
To her, she’s riding in an automatic car
Unable to get out because she's strapped to the seat
Her heart can’t stay on a steady beat
Her minds rushing to catch up with her feet
Obedience is all she has to know
A lesson learned, but like always, not on her own
She tries to block out the lights placed in front of her eyes
Doubts and confusion over-populate her mind
Had to learn to shadow the emotions away
Hopefully someone will help her for her life's sake

what you think?

angel18 · 04-13-2006, 10:56 AM

it's okay needs a little work though!

Crazy Luv · 04-14-2006, 03:01 PM

like...

04-12-2006, 05:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	Sarah Sarah She's climbing up the stairs to the goal Burning herself against every step she takes You see, the goal wasn’t chosen on her own It was a sacrifice like everything else she makes She looks steady but really she's stumbling And she can’t seem to find her landing To her, she’s riding in an automatic car Unable to get out because she's strapped to the seat Her heart can’t stay on a steady beat Her minds rushing to catch up with her feet Obedience is all she has to know A lesson learned, but like always, not on her own She tries to block out the lights placed in front of her eyes Doubts and confusion over-populate her mind Had to learn to shadow the emotions away Hopefully someone will help her for her life's sake what you think?

04-13-2006, 10:56 AM	#2 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	it's okay needs a little work though!

04-14-2006, 03:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	like...