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Old 04-19-2006, 01:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
that's my war face.
 
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The pressure was on
They wanted us to fail
And we couldn't control it
so we didn't prevail
we just let it slide
took it all on the chin
it was a matter of time
before we got sucked in
we let the comments pass
with a laugh and a smile
and knew with every move
that we were both on trial
you said you were suprised
but you knew all along
that with friends like these
we were bound to go wrong

CHORUS
I knew it
I knew it
I knew that it would get to us
I knew it would
I knew it
I knew it
When you said it couldn't harm us
I knew it could


I'm so stubborn
you know that well
and to let this beat us
is taking me through hell
and I want another try
yet I know you're right
it's no use to hide a romance
creeping round at night
May we try again
when the talk has gone down
and start something up
without a word or a sound
I lost my soul
but now it's been found
and it's keeping me going
cos you're out of bounds

CHORUS
I knew it
I knew it
I knew that it would get to us
I knew it would
I knew it
I knew it
When you said it couldn't harm us
I knew it could
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Old 04-19-2006, 02:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i like this. At first the chorus didnt do it for me, but i grew into it, so its all good.
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Old 04-19-2006, 02:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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id like to hear some of your stuff i like your style of writing a lot
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Old 04-19-2006, 02:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Why thankyou. I haven't created no songs yet, I'm looking for a decent band to lend my wisdom to Plus I'm only 15 so it's pretty hard to be taken seriously with this sort of thing.
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Old 04-19-2006, 02:53 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i understand. do you just sing or play guitar or bass or something.
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Old 04-19-2006, 02:58 PM   #6 (permalink)
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None of those. My singing voice is all over the place-on some songs I can sing well, on others I really can't. I make sure these songs suit my voice though, so I should be able to sing any of the songs I have posted decently. I've got a good ear for music though which runs in my family-I can create the rythm/beat etc. to a song in my head and usually they are really good. The only problem is I know nothing about chords so I can't write them down. I just write lyrics based around that rythm and hope that I can remember it.
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Old 04-19-2006, 03:14 PM   #7 (permalink)
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i could tell you some really basic theory that would help if you want
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Old 04-20-2006, 02:08 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Well I own a guitar and as soon as I get it tuned (no one I know knows how to tune the dam thing) then I will start learning to play. Thanks for the offer though, but I won't waste your time
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