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Old 04-21-2006, 05:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
that's my war face.
 
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Default Pack up on fake kisses and love

Forget what you know and learn
stray from the path and turn
you know you're going nowhere
And I don't want to meet you there
Take your time and think
is it all worth it for a drink
maybe it seems so hard
but others thoughts don't discard

CHORUS
Pack up on fake kisses and love
and walk through those pushes and shoves
cos we all love you really

Carousels and spinning lights
let them learn delights
show them what you never had
be a proper Dad
So try some more with your last shot
this is all you got
they'll forgive and forget
there's happiness there yet

CHORUS
Pack up on fake kisses and love
and walk through those pushes and shoves
cos we all love you really
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Old 04-25-2006, 06:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like this. This is purdy! And I think there's a congruence between the mood created by the words and their content. I'm not the biggest fan of hard rhyming, but to be fair, I have no idea of the melody, so I imagine it probably sounds just right. And the song itself seems really heartfelt and well thought out. !
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