I hope it's all worth it BIATCH (memories, songs, Horn)

TrampInaTux · 04-22-2006, 02:09 PM

I only realised you were right
when you realised the same thing
when we sat lonely that night
and enjoyed the company we bring
I never allowed myself to get caught up
but now I don't have a choice
now go back to that world with your eyes shut
and let me guide you with my voice

CHORUS
You bring me down and raise me up
I've never felt like this before
And the choices I have made are bad
but it's all worth it I'm sure... I'm sure....

We sat together in awkward silence
neither knowing what to say
conversation shot down with annoying violence
if only we both never felt this way
My feelings are strong but my voice is weak
I'm scared of things that I might awake
and if by any chance it's emotion you seek
then you might aswell leave now for your own sake

CHORUS
You bring me down and raise me up
I've never felt like this before
And the choices I have made are bad
but it's all worth it I'm sure... I'm sure...

Well I like this one, even if I do say so myself. I like the line 'my feelings are strong but my voice is weak' that's probably the greatest line I have written in any song. But I'm just blowing my own horn again.
By the way the BIATCH was just used to draw you in. And look. It's worked.

~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ · 04-22-2006, 02:46 PM

How many songs do you think you have actually made? I'm just wondering because you seem to post songs regularly.

TrampInaTux · 04-22-2006, 03:00 PM

I don't write them down on paper anymore. Everything you see is fresh off the press, as it were. When I have an idea I make a song about it, type it up on here and post it. It's the best thing to do. You need someone criticising every piece of work you do in my opinion, because that is the only way you will improve. I don't just post my best songs on here or whatever because I think that you people need to see everything so I can improve on all aspects.

~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ · 04-22-2006, 03:06 PM

I would have to agree. That is the only way to know what to improve.

Doc.DGAF · 04-28-2006, 08:24 AM

I like that, brings up some memories.

smoggey2002 · 05-01-2006, 09:50 AM

Yeh Same As ^ ;-(

04-22-2006, 02:09 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	I hope it's all worth it BIATCH I only realised you were right when you realised the same thing when we sat lonely that night and enjoyed the company we bring I never allowed myself to get caught up but now I don't have a choice now go back to that world with your eyes shut and let me guide you with my voice CHORUS You bring me down and raise me up I've never felt like this before And the choices I have made are bad but it's all worth it I'm sure... I'm sure.... We sat together in awkward silence neither knowing what to say conversation shot down with annoying violence if only we both never felt this way My feelings are strong but my voice is weak I'm scared of things that I might awake and if by any chance it's emotion you seek then you might aswell leave now for your own sake CHORUS You bring me down and raise me up I've never felt like this before And the choices I have made are bad but it's all worth it I'm sure... I'm sure... Well I like this one, even if I do say so myself. I like the line 'my feelings are strong but my voice is weak' that's probably the greatest line I have written in any song. But I'm just blowing my own horn again. By the way the BIATCH was just used to draw you in. And look. It's worked.

04-28-2006, 08:24 AM	#5 (permalink)
Doc.DGAF Uhh-I am Octiposter-huhuh Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: South Florida Posts: 232	I like that, brings up some memories. __________________ Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.-Confucius Talking much about oneself can also be a means to conceal oneself.-Friedrich Nietzsche Now hatred is by far the longest pleasure; men love in haste but they detest at leisure.-Lord Byron Popularity's bad for you. I avoid it like the plague.-Brian Mulrooney

04-22-2006, 02:46 PM	#2 (permalink)
~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: In the sea... Posts: 252	How many songs do you think you have actually made? I'm just wondering because you seem to post songs regularly.

04-22-2006, 03:00 PM	#3 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	I don't write them down on paper anymore. Everything you see is fresh off the press, as it were. When I have an idea I make a song about it, type it up on here and post it. It's the best thing to do. You need someone criticising every piece of work you do in my opinion, because that is the only way you will improve. I don't just post my best songs on here or whatever because I think that you people need to see everything so I can improve on all aspects.

04-22-2006, 03:06 PM	#4 (permalink)
~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: In the sea... Posts: 252	I would have to agree. That is the only way to know what to improve.

05-01-2006, 09:50 AM	#6 (permalink)
smoggey2002 Groupie Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 14	Yeh Same As ^ ;-(