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Old 05-01-2006, 09:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Post Homey Be Tellin Me

Please Dont Use These Lyrics Their Already Beenin Used In Rap I Will Be Doin
Check Out Hip Hop Rap Soon FOR Our Songs ;

Yeh
I be bring the truth to your eyes
The pain we be feelin inside
Sometimes its hard
So many girls tell me they
Carryin my baby
Somebody's else chlid
People that want to belive
Keep your eyes open
Take 1 day at a time
I containing rollin
I'm just livein 2 die
Now i'am livein a life
Where no one can hurt me
Bring ya boys down
5 boys come down step to me
10 boys bring dem all down
Were the VL Clan
Were all for f**king 1 on 1's
Dont take no s*it from a hoe
Homey be tellin me
Claire a hoe homey
Homey be tellin me
What the f**k was you thinkin Homey
She just a f**k up Homey
She be wid a real MAN
I be tellin my homey
My love be wise
I just a kid homey
I'll containing rolling
Just livein 2 die
Yeh homey
Next boi be takin sides
He be takin 1 day at a time
He anit containing rollin
Just livein by low lifes
Wanna be's
Live by the rulez
Die by the rulez
I be busting out my
44 when im skyhigh
Yeh officer comes along
Gives me a push
Callin me a sad low life
Officer gave us some time
And now im layin on my back
4 walls one door
Im in a f**ing cellblock
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Old 05-01-2006, 09:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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the flow throughout is a little off to me and i don't really get the point of the rap, could u explain it?
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Old 05-01-2006, 09:58 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hmm You Want Me To Explain ?
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Old 05-01-2006, 10:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
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the whole thing really?
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Old 05-01-2006, 10:02 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Well Just Look At It Like Your Gf Tells You She Has Your Kid You Dont See Test In 14 Weeks . Ploice Be Pushin You Around Callin You Names Then People Start In The End Your In A Cell Block ?
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Old 05-01-2006, 10:06 AM   #6 (permalink)
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ahh okay now i get the meaning of it, thanx. i still think the flow is off though!
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Old 05-01-2006, 10:07 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Hmm Off Thought Like ? Got Any Ideas How To Make It Little Less Off Though ?
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Old 05-01-2006, 12:25 PM   #8 (permalink)
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it's probably just the way i'm reading it and the type of words u've used
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