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Old 05-04-2006, 12:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
that's my war face.
 
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First come first serve
and I liked you first
so I think I deserve you
All them days I spent
talking with him about you
just didn't have a clue
Just didn't know that he liked you
Even though
you didn't like me
You should've thought of my feelings
You don't want me to be dealing with

You don't want me to be dealing with
You don't want me to be dealing with
You don't want me to be dealing with

My long time friend
and my should-be girlfriend
How could you be so malicious
things are getting very vicious
What makes it worse
What really makes this hurt is...
just didn't have a clue
just didn't know that he liked you
Even though
You didn't like me
You should've thought of my feelings
You don't want me to be dealing with

You don't want me to be dealing with
You don't want me to be dealing with
You don't want me to be dealing with

So you and him
are probably laughing behind my back
but I don't care
cos I'm getting my revenge and that's a fact
Do you remember what I said
or has it gone through that thick head
of yours

You don't want me to be dealing with
You don't want me to be dealing with
You don't want me to be dealing with




This is based on a situation I'm going through at the moment... I'm the bastard of a 'long time friend' in this scenario. I'm a cruel person, but hey it's a cruel world.
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Old 05-04-2006, 07:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
a l'amou fou pou tout
 
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this sounds sappy to me & left me with a 'roll my eyes' feeling, so basically, i dont like this one.
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Old 05-05-2006, 12:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Aww, dude. I've been the bastard of a long time friend too. If a was as good at writing as you, I would've written the exact same thing.
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