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explosions-in-my-pants 05-16-2006 09:57 PM

A place of burial :by:MJSM
 
I don’t want to give up, but I don’t want to fake it
I’m scared of falling apart again
I can’t hold the pieces together
Can we go back to the beginning?
I can’t stay this way forever

Save me now…
Can we make forever start today?

(Course)
Lay the flower on the grave
Say someday it will all be ok
Lay my hand on yours
Maybe someday it will all be ok?

(Course)
I know we can’t end something that hasn’t begun
But I can’t move on, I can’t pretend
I’m sorry but I just can’t be friends

Here is the story of each other
When were we ever together?
Was there ever a forever

(Course)
Lay the flower on the grave
Say someday it will all be ok
Lay my hand on yours
Maybe someday it will all be ok?

I should have listened to everyone
I had to do this on my own
I couldn’t leave better enough alone
Now look what I’ve done

Please don’t let go its ripping me apart
My place of burial is in your heart
Forever is a grave apart
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Now rip it apart... :)
the only real part i like in it is:

"Please don't let go its ripping me apart
my place of burial is in your heart
forever is a grave apart."

MURDER JUNKIE 05-16-2006 11:01 PM

What does the MJ stand for?

MURDER JUNKIE? http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f3...p/badteeth.gif

Crowe 05-17-2006 12:08 AM

It's called a chorus homie.

blackTshirt 05-17-2006 01:04 AM

every line is one big cliche

bungalow 05-17-2006 06:05 AM

A suckity bowl of sucking suck. :)
Honestly. Cliche. Chorus . Suck. Cliche. Chorus. Suck

TrampInaTux 05-17-2006 01:59 PM

Terrible. Awful. Diabolical. Get out. *points to door*

sleepy jack 05-17-2006 04:26 PM

I hate to be trendy, but ewww for all the reasons above.

Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies 05-17-2006 07:32 PM

woo, try stepping out of the world of platitude, and entering in a world you create on your own. It'll take long ass stepping, but it's worth it.

but, then again it has a chance of blowin up. I mean, look at them Pussy Cat dolls...but it might take some exotic dancing from you, your choice...

Laces Out Dan! 05-17-2006 07:33 PM

:eek: ! This is bad news man...like 80% is all cliche

Real_Eyez_C_Real_Lies 05-17-2006 07:36 PM

Shes a man :yikes:. Sorry hun, never mind about that dancing, they already got Olivia and Ciara doing that.


















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