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Old 05-16-2006, 09:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default A place of burial :by:MJSM

I don’t want to give up, but I don’t want to fake it
I’m scared of falling apart again
I can’t hold the pieces together
Can we go back to the beginning?
I can’t stay this way forever

Save me now…
Can we make forever start today?

(Course)
Lay the flower on the grave
Say someday it will all be ok
Lay my hand on yours
Maybe someday it will all be ok?

(Course)
I know we can’t end something that hasn’t begun
But I can’t move on, I can’t pretend
I’m sorry but I just can’t be friends

Here is the story of each other
When were we ever together?
Was there ever a forever

(Course)
Lay the flower on the grave
Say someday it will all be ok
Lay my hand on yours
Maybe someday it will all be ok?

I should have listened to everyone
I had to do this on my own
I couldn’t leave better enough alone
Now look what I’ve done

Please don’t let go its ripping me apart
My place of burial is in your heart
Forever is a grave apart
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Now rip it apart...
the only real part i like in it is:

"Please don't let go its ripping me apart
my place of burial is in your heart
forever is a grave apart."
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Old 05-16-2006, 11:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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What does the MJ stand for?

MURDER JUNKIE?
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Old 05-17-2006, 12:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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It's called a chorus homie.
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Old 05-17-2006, 01:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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every line is one big cliche
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Old 05-17-2006, 06:05 AM   #5 (permalink)
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A suckity bowl of sucking suck.
Honestly. Cliche. Chorus . Suck. Cliche. Chorus. Suck
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Old 05-17-2006, 01:59 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Terrible. Awful. Diabolical. Get out. *points to door*
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Old 05-17-2006, 04:26 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I hate to be trendy, but ewww for all the reasons above.
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Old 05-17-2006, 07:32 PM   #8 (permalink)
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woo, try stepping out of the world of platitude, and entering in a world you create on your own. It'll take long ass stepping, but it's worth it.

but, then again it has a chance of blowin up. I mean, look at them Pussy Cat dolls...but it might take some exotic dancing from you, your choice...
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Old 05-17-2006, 07:33 PM   #9 (permalink)
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! This is bad news man...like 80% is all cliche
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Old 05-17-2006, 07:36 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Shes a man . Sorry hun, never mind about that dancing, they already got Olivia and Ciara doing that.


















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