well im sure if u were led zeppelin u could make the lyrics work, but i wouldt start a career just yet

Just remember, that door swings both ways. If you act mean or stupid, that's what you'll get from everyone. But I take it as they want to fight with us, it means we're worthy advisarys. LOL! I laugh everytime they think they've gotten us to surrender. We come right back and bite the haters in their ass.They'll grow to respect us eventually.

Some reasons I'll never respect you:

1. You like Insane Clown Posse
2. You are a liar (see the first post in this thread)
3. You ignore certain parts of mine and other people posts when you realize we are right
4. You are a brainwashed hipocrite

A queen can buy a painting from some poor man for a $1.00 back in the 1600-1700's and until the painter dies its worth nothing, then because the queen enjoyed his work, the painters works, his paintings all become beautiful and worthy.. I can name 3 painters that to me sucked at painting.. Van Gogh for one. His paintings look like a child could have done them, yet this man was considered to be an amazing painter.

My point is many people are going to have many different opinions, I don't think this artist was worthy of half the good things he got for his work, like many artist from that time.

I personally think that a cliched song isn't always going to be a bad song, look at half the bands you listen to, there songs, read there lyrics, and i bet you can find 100's of cliched songs.. when put to music and sung it could sound amazing tho?

Any one can be harsh because it needs to be said or because its something to be said just becuase it can be said. But saying it cliched and then judging it becaus of that isn't right.

this song be any means isn't a great song, nor a good one.. but i'm sure if we don't scare this boy(?) away his writers may or may not get better.

I was harsh because it was necessary. His song was cliche, and cheesy.
I told him why it didn't flow, I told him to mix up his rhyme sceme. I told him to diversify his vocabulary. He couldn't handle a critism, so he made the idiotic reply challenging me to do better. That is the point where I told him flat out that his song was horrible. If he can't take a normal critism, I guess the only thing that sinks in is flat-out-your-song-sucks.

http://www.essentialart.com/sw/Van_G...the_Artist.jpg

Show me the child that could paint this, and I'll give you a lot of money.

we could use more Van Goghs than cliche bands

We sure could.
Uglycasanova, don't think that just because you are new, you cannot tell someone what you think of their song. They posted it on a public forum, they should be ready for whatever replies they get.

Whatever, Bungalow, you're lost. I feel sorry for you. Maybe you'd have friends if you accepted people more. If you don't want to respect us, then don't, your hate is worth nothing to us. But don't ask for respect back if you don't give it. I feel sorry for you.

I feel sorry for you as well.
You have had to sit through countless ICP songs, can't get much worse than that.