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Old 06-17-2006, 08:33 PM   #21 (permalink)
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i dont remeber when i was 1 or 2 or 3.. thats theree years odnt matter to me
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 06-17-2006, 08:34 PM   #22 (permalink)
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I'm messed in the head, what can I say?

No thanks, I'll keep on. Who says I don't read? Why should I care? HAA. */slap in the face*.
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Old 06-19-2006, 05:35 PM   #23 (permalink)
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There has never been a good song written by an 11 year old, you aren't going to change that.
are you positive about that, its a solid fact



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I meant it's silly to care about how old people think you are. It really doesn't matter.

But anyways, Stop writing. Start reading. Try again in three years when obtain the ability to have feelings and a more interesting view on the world.
how you gon go telling her not to write anymore, and when to start again. what the fuck is this shit. Don't post in her thread then. And obviously she has feelings, it ain't hard to realize that.
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Old 06-19-2006, 08:23 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Yes. 100% positive fact.
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Old 06-19-2006, 08:30 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Don’t take yourself too seriously
[You’re young and then you die]
Do what you want
While you can
And don’t let anyone
Tell you different

Don’t judge a magazine by the star on the front
Don’t be fake--don’t put on a front
(Never conform never brake)

Force people’s eyes open
Be a bitch if it’s really who you are
Someone will love you for it
(God knows I would.)

Don’t be afraid
Never be.
The worst outcome is death
And there is no Hell.
Evil is a choice
Choose what you want
(It makes no difference to the rest of us in the long run)

Destiny is
Fate is
(just is)
It’s all gonna happen anyway.

Make yourself happy
Be selfish
Live for you
Be selfish
Don’t think before you speak
Rely on first impressions
Love yourself if no one else will
(Be your own best friend, confide in yourself and embrace)

Live like you won’t be (here) tomorrow
Love (with) all you can
Make yourself happy
(please yourself above all others) (hahahaha)

Never be sad, never get mad
Useless emotions are too much
If you don’t use it you loose it
Smile before you become depressed.
Smile today, smile tomorrow
Love always.
Red = what should be changed or taken out.

I rather enjoyed it tho... Just because it doesn't flow when reading it doesn't mean anything.. When songs are put to music it can change everything..
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I meant it's silly to care about how old people think you are. It really doesn't matter.

But anyways, Stop writing. Start reading. Try again in three years when obtain the ability to have feelings and a more interesting view on the world.
When I was growing up, I was happy, and then I had my very emotional depressing moments, I was very aware of my feelings.. Don't tell someone to wait a few years till they can feel.. when you have no idea what there life has been like. You don't have to be 14 to have emotions.
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Old 06-19-2006, 09:19 PM   #26 (permalink)
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^ delvolped emotions at least
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Old 06-20-2006, 05:41 AM   #27 (permalink)
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thank you much Sab =] & real eyes.

Mikey take your own advice and STFU ;]
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Old 06-20-2006, 08:13 AM   #28 (permalink)
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Old 06-20-2006, 09:15 AM   #29 (permalink)
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i think poetry or whatever this is should have like.. metaphores and stuff.. and when you have so many brackets everything's so explained and everything's so easy to understand that it's not called song writing or whatever this is.
it's just writing stuff everyone knows and put them on seperate lines
which is not art.. at least not in this case
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Old 06-20-2006, 11:02 AM   #30 (permalink)
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