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Old 07-01-2006, 04:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
that's my war face.
 
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Default Thoughtless Words That Required So Much Thought.

Can I say this?
Without breaking my heart again
When I've just let go
Should I
bring these feelings back again
Hold hands with me
anyone
I need to feel the love again
Hold hands with me
anyone
I need to feel the love again
Can I miss you?
Without dying inside a bit
You had just left my life
Then you
Came flying back into it
Hold me close
anyone
anyone will do tonight
Hold me close
anyone
anyone will do tonight
Can I cry these (tears)?
Without feeling so broke inside
Experiencing things
That I
Would much rather hide
Share dreams with me
anyone
They are absent tonight
Share dreams with me
anyone
They are absent tonight
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Old 07-01-2006, 04:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Are you planning on cutting yourself emojesus?
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Old 07-01-2006, 07:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I was emo the other day, I cut myself on my braces
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Old 07-01-2006, 09:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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chyuppers, this does sound emo, the poor thing(person in the song/poem). And the style of the writing is like Enough Cryin by Mary J Blige, annoyin a bit
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Old 07-02-2006, 02:55 AM   #5 (permalink)
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**** this is emo...

WHAT'S HAPPENING!

I'd just listened to a lot of Smiths and then put on 'Angie', so I was going for a mix of both of them. I liked it while I was typing it up, but my God it is emo...
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Old 07-02-2006, 04:03 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Wanna go have a slit our wrists party? Well heck, WANNA SLEEP OVER? WE CAN STAY UP LATE AND TALK ABOUT BOYS!
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