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TrampInaTux 08-01-2006 12:45 PM

This is a unusually long warning.
 
Hey Kid
You're another hybrid
Televisual images
cinematic collages
Regroup to bring you down but this
is a teenage protest
You hope that they've all noticed
Hey son
Tell me what's your problem
Living your life through a lens
Giving them all time to defend
You need to catch them unawares my friend
In your teenage protest
Your teenage protest

CHORUS
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Under your skin

Hey Kid
Look at what God did
Unmistakeable mistake
Now you're left to carry the weight
The world is in such a state
Continue to protest
And hope the world will notice
Hey girl
Come out of your downward spiral
He needs some happiness for a while
You can be his 3 month trial
The juice to make his brain go wild
Part of his protest
Make them all notice

CHORUS
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Under your skin

either/or 08-02-2006 01:10 AM

nice. you've gotten alot better.

TrampInaTux 08-02-2006 03:56 AM

Heeeeeey either/or! Welcome back bud.

Alo 08-02-2006 04:05 AM

It could be nice, but I don't think you should sing the chorus twice each time, drop the second half, and either make the chorus longer, or leave it. I think that'd sound better.


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