This is a unusually long warning.

TrampInaTux · 08-01-2006, 12:45 PM

Hey Kid
You're another hybrid
Televisual images
cinematic collages
Regroup to bring you down but this
is a teenage protest
You hope that they've all noticed
Hey son
Tell me what's your problem
Living your life through a lens
Giving them all time to defend
You need to catch them unawares my friend
In your teenage protest
Your teenage protest

CHORUS
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Under your skin

Hey Kid
Look at what God did
Unmistakeable mistake
Now you're left to carry the weight
The world is in such a state
Continue to protest
And hope the world will notice
Hey girl
Come out of your downward spiral
He needs some happiness for a while
You can be his 3 month trial
The juice to make his brain go wild
Part of his protest
Make them all notice

CHORUS
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Don't make a sound
Talking is giving in
Unallowed
To mingle with your kin
Don't let this get under your skin
Under your skin

either/or · 08-02-2006, 01:10 AM

nice. you've gotten alot better.

TrampInaTux · 08-02-2006, 03:56 AM

Heeeeeey either/or! Welcome back bud.

Alo · 08-02-2006, 04:05 AM

It could be nice, but I don't think you should sing the chorus twice each time, drop the second half, and either make the chorus longer, or leave it. I think that'd sound better.

08-01-2006, 12:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	This is a unusually long warning. Hey Kid You're another hybrid Televisual images cinematic collages Regroup to bring you down but this is a teenage protest You hope that they've all noticed Hey son Tell me what's your problem Living your life through a lens Giving them all time to defend You need to catch them unawares my friend In your teenage protest Your teenage protest CHORUS Don't make a sound Talking is giving in Unallowed To mingle with your kin Don't let this get under your skin Don't make a sound Talking is giving in Unallowed To mingle with your kin Don't let this get under your skin Under your skin Hey Kid Look at what God did Unmistakeable mistake Now you're left to carry the weight The world is in such a state Continue to protest And hope the world will notice Hey girl Come out of your downward spiral He needs some happiness for a while You can be his 3 month trial The juice to make his brain go wild Part of his protest Make them all notice CHORUS Don't make a sound Talking is giving in Unallowed To mingle with your kin Don't let this get under your skin Don't make a sound Talking is giving in Unallowed To mingle with your kin Don't let this get under your skin Under your skin

08-02-2006, 01:10 AM	#2 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	nice. you've gotten alot better. __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

08-02-2006, 04:05 AM	#4 (permalink)
Alo Scarf Join Date: May 2006 Location: Brighton, UK Posts: 715	It could be nice, but I don't think you should sing the chorus twice each time, drop the second half, and either make the chorus longer, or leave it. I think that'd sound better. __________________ I rocked my shoelaces untied

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08-02-2006, 03:56 AM	#3 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Heeeeeey either/or! Welcome back bud.