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08-10-2006, 05:19 PM
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Raptor
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Metro Detroit, MI
Posts: 1,321
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Ode to an ex
Scream my name
Rip me apart The pain helps me see And, oh, how I love it (He's in your head Like his nails in your back) I want you to lie to me I love it when you want me I hate it when you're here, so back the **** off (My heart burns for you I love you but I just dont want you) I dont really write lyrics. I compose melodies better. So these arent the best, but I want to improve, so I posted these which I just wrote and hoped to get some pointers and suggestions. How bad is it?
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So here's to living life miserable.
And here's to all the lonely stories that I've told. Maybe drinking wine will validate my sorrow. Every man needs a muse and mine could be the bottle. |
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