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08-28-2006, 04:55 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Under you bed..im not lying take a look/kiwi land
Posts: 25
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Try me
my style is punk/emo whatever you wanna call it, ill let you judge it when you read it. im just starting in the song writing so..yeah if its not THAT good, thats the reason.
"try me" (verse one) the sum of my life adds up to nothin time and time again i feel im suffocating im just so sick of all the fighting sometimes i feel i should walk away and start again (chorus *) im taking it all out on you and all the sh*t you put me through my head is overun with threats am i in debt? (verse two) all my words screaming out loud sieze the day when its all out my boredom just passes the time untill i just get old and die talkings just a waste of breath and livings just a waste of death (*) im taking it all out on you and all the sh*t you put me through my head is overun with threats am i in debt? (bridge) i dont need you f**k your desision im going... untill you decide you be "you" again (*) im taking it all out on you and all the sh*t you put me through my head is overun with threats am i in debt? (end verse) i met you on the street the other day all my words i didnt know what to say we exchange a glance but we just walk past seems better this way
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my boredom just passes the time untill i just get old and die talkings just a waste of breath and livings just a waste of death |
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08-28-2006, 10:42 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Under you bed..im not lying take a look/kiwi land
Posts: 25
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awsome, 18 views but no replys, now i feel special
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my boredom just passes the time untill i just get old and die talkings just a waste of breath and livings just a waste of death |
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08-28-2006, 10:46 PM
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isfckingdead
Join Date: Nov 2004
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08-30-2006, 04:37 AM
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Don't think twice
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: A basement on the hill
Posts: 352
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this song is only relevant if you live in a poverty stricken or war torn country or something. if not.....boo hoo, get a tissue.
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Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation |
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08-31-2006, 12:05 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Under you bed..im not lying take a look/kiwi land
Posts: 25
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you could at least not sound like an ass
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