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09-08-2006, 02:23 PM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Em Rof Si Siht
I wrote this a while ago. I even wrote it backwards so no one would be able to read it even if they did find it. I feel like a loser for writing it, but I really needed to at the time. It was something I just really needed to do. This was after I had the conversation with MJ and I was really going through a rough patch with everything, and I went on holiday nearing the point of breakdown and I just sat down and wrote this. It started off as just one of my usual songs, but then developed into a full blown poem with everything poured out into it. I don't quite know why I'm posting it up here, it's just cos I've got no one to talk to about this and I suppose I need someone to read this, even though I don't want to go shoving it in peoples faces. So what better way to show it to people than to show it to total strangers on MB? Here it is, I know it isn't very good but it's the most truthful thing I've ever written.
Liquid mascara lyrics on the back of a bus seat behind two lovers typecast as more exhibitionists Be free, you are creations made to have these feelings You won't be stopped by standards Burn down those barricades It is not common to be open Embrace your youth, it is short Life can end suddenly, y'know Don't spend it in other peoples thoughts Right time right place in your life maybe that's all it is or maybe it's only a small part of it What would he say, eh? If he saw you now Limping through every day In a most mature way This isn't you, is it? When did this all change? You could only answer that question if it was possible to know This is your present to yourself The girft of growth is it nature's own? or was it man made? Ponder that thought With his cold hands in your grasp Feel them sift between your fingers feel the strings of your heart begin to rust How can your world crumble? how can he turn into dust? Can I restart without dancing in your ashes? Make it all seem possible again Make life seem undaunting Make the pen and paper touch mean just as much? Ah, when did all these depths appear? Could I be so selfish as to make this a milestone in my life? So wrapped up in ourselves we forget just how wrapped up we are Mate, I don't want to be sensitive I don't want to cry on show Does this make me hit til my hands are sore? The answer to that I don't know Everyone says no one understands But they are lying How can no one know when they tell them all the time? No one wants to deal with me aswell No one is ready yet When will they be? That's for me to decide Until you can open up my brain and drink my thoughts then you shall not know I'm quite content with that yet apparently I'm sinking inwards And I thought I was straightforward huh people will find this. people will read this. people will try and understand. people will fail. I am not complicated but unfortunately life is I will continue too love The one thing I'm good at And stage my tiny rebellions in the ampitheatre universe I'll keep your eyes submerged in mine Friends, Father, Son We are one. |
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09-08-2006, 02:34 PM
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Dat's Der Bunny!
Join Date: Jul 2006
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I dunno what to say about it. It's really good, at least I like it, and it makes me reflect, on life, ingeneral, and I like stuff that makes me do that.
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09-08-2006, 02:55 PM
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Dat's Der Bunny!
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Yeah I gathered that. That doesn't mean I don't have to like it. What do YOU think of it?
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09-08-2006, 03:09 PM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
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I don't think anything of it. It's not meant to be good to read, it's not meant to be a poem/song or anything, it's a load of statements thrown together. Sometimes it rhymes because it just does, just because I could think of things that would rhyme together and make it sound more meaningful. I never thought this through beforehand, I just kept on writing and everything jumbled out at once.
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09-08-2006, 03:18 PM
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isfckingdead
Join Date: Nov 2004
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Shiit, it was really good hobo. It takes, like alot of guts to post personal lyrics on here, I still can't post some stuff I wanna post. =/ I reallly like it though, especially the ending it ties it up nicely.
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09-08-2006, 03:20 PM
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that's my war face.
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I think it takes an amount of geekiness to post personal stuff on here, but like I said, this is the closest thing to psychology I'm getting near. By the way, would you be able to make it so that the stars don't come up when I swear? I promise I won't abuse the privilege! *gets down on both knees and unzips Crowquill's trousers*
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09-08-2006, 03:24 PM
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isfckingdead
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Yeah.
Type the word, then just have one of the words colored black. It should look like this, except replace the () with [] f(COLOR="Black")u(/COLOR)ck. It'll post without the words, I suck at explaining. So if this makes no sense, tell me and i'll try again.
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