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Blain 09-10-2006 05:07 AM

Atonement
 
The screams of the damned, it's all you can here
It's a noise that causes insanity.
As the shredding darkness closes in, all you can do is leer
That's what failed humanity.
But theres a special task, atonement
It will help you seek for salvage
If a lost priority can save you from ruin
What could a precious one do?

The hearts you've harmed, the damage done
It can all be swept away.
A treasonable act, a life perished.
This is what it's meant to heal!
A simple task can save your mind, it will save you from corruption...
Corruption... Demised (x2)


This is all I have, it may seem really Christiany but I didn't mean for it to be lol

Ace 09-20-2006 10:52 PM

The only real thing I don't like are the first and third lines.
Or I could just not be getting the timing at all, but I'd change the first and third line up.

either/or 09-20-2006 11:10 PM

i just watched hostel and for some reason this song reminds me of it.


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