ZeppelinAir

i havent done one in awhile so here is one

On The Edge And Falling

Sit at home and wait for the call you never get,
Desperately alone and on the edge,
All the while thinking of the things you regret,
Just wanting to jump of that ledge,

Time and time again you forget,
About the ones who care if your alive or dead,
And you know that they never regret,
What they always said,

There you go last in line again,
And the last to be picked,
But you always know,
That you will always have the last laugh,

Time and time again you forget,
About the ones who care if your alive or dead,
And you know that they never regret,
What they always said,

Closer than ever before,
The ledge creeping in on you,
Last thoughts in your head of what they always said,
Before you fall off the edge…

Time and time again you forget,
About the ones who care if your alive or dead,
And you know that they never regret,
What they always said

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Kyren Tsunami

quite well-written but i wonder if the chorus could be said more? a little short there.

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ZeppelinAir

om i will lengthen it

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