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Old 11-08-2006, 10:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default A New Beginning

A NEW BEGINNING

Wake up in the morning with my eyes sewn shut,
Shower, dress, then work with my eyes sewn shut,
Another day passes with my eyes sewn shut,
My worlds crashing down around me so my eyes stay shut.

In darkness hiding from the pain,
Pitch-black everyday’s the same,
Afraid to see that nothing remains,
And each glance reminds me I’m to blame.

How much longer can I go on with my eyes sewn shut?
Living without feeling and my eyes sewn shut,
Can’t avoid problems forever with my eyes sewn shut,
Nothing can get better with my eyes sewn shut.

Some call it an epiphany,
But something sparked inside of me,
Its time to face reality,
And become the man I want to be.

No more walking blindly with my eyes sewn shut,
No ignoring, no more denying with my eyes sewn shut,
I’m done simply surviving with my eyes sewn shut,
No more slowly dying with my eyes sewn shut.

My eyes are now open!
I can see what must be done!
The changes won’t be easy!
But the changes have begun!

No more walking blindly with my eyes sewn shut,
No ignoring, no more denying with my eyes sewn shut,
I’m done simply surviving with my eyes sewn shut,
No more slowly dying with my eyes sewn shut.
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Old 11-14-2006, 09:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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god... O.o look like you got "broken record" disease... O.o Just kidding! ^^ but i must say that you use "my eyessewn shut" too much, it's seem your volcabulary isn't that expandable then.. despite of that it's somewhat annoying... -__-
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Old 11-14-2006, 09:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah, i know you meant to use the whole "Eyes sewn shut" deal a lot. Its not working. Very Repetitive.
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Old 11-15-2006, 03:09 PM   #4 (permalink)
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that part is screamed by the back-up vocals. I didnt run out of ideas, or words because of a lack of vocabulary, its meant to be repetitive.
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Old 11-16-2006, 05:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I can see what your saying about "my eyes sewn shut," being screamed by the back up vocals. I like it alot.
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