We all write poems here, love
 

What have I crept into?
This heart does not belong here
I stare at problems past
but they refuse to disappear
It's cruel to be this cold
Maybe I'm dead who knows?
There's a fear around you
I can feel it
Feel it in my trenches
where you are fighting this war
and losing!!

I dont like the ending, its sort of weak and a bit on the cheesy side other then that its pretty good.

nice one

It's short and yet I feel it's too busy. I know that brevity is sometimes considered a virtue, but you have good material in which you can explore. If you do plan on keeping it this short, the last two lines are woefully out of place in a piece that is not completely about war.