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Old 12-03-2006, 02:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Sun kissed,
And smiling fine.
She looks sweetly at me,
And I gently melt, so slowly.
As her finger-tips caress my fair neck,
And trace sweet lines of ashen dew.
I sigh out in whispers
And take her hand.
Sun kissed…
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Old 12-03-2006, 03:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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OMG A NEW n00bs WHO WRITING DOESN'T SUCK =O

This is pretty, I like it.
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Old 12-03-2006, 03:32 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Lmao. I was waiting for you to say something. I've heard you can be very critical
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Old 12-03-2006, 03:45 PM   #4 (permalink)
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He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase.

In other words...you remind him of himself.
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Old 12-03-2006, 03:47 PM   #6 (permalink)
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He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase.

In other words...you remind him of himself.
HEY

Shut up!

My romantic poems deal with being in fields at night, ask Crowe.
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Old 12-03-2006, 03:49 PM   #7 (permalink)
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With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart.
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Old 12-03-2006, 03:51 PM   #8 (permalink)
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With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart.
Hey, can I use that?
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If anything romantic happens in Crowquill's world - it must take place near a girl with nice curves, with a gentle moonlight, in or near a field... and someone has to cry. I love it.
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