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Old 01-08-2007, 12:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Please, constructive criticism ONLY! Any of you self-righteous liberal communists who only want to profess your g@y marriage, baby killing, anti-christian ways please spam elsewhere.



Idiocy That Eradicates

Idiocy is the word of the day
Those who follow blindly do so willingly
Denying the truth is the flow
Going with the flow is whats easy
Shall we bash christians today?
Or Republicans perhaps?
Lets check CNN to see who we should hate today
The latest Greenday album says we need to hate Bush
BILLY JOE IS GOD
MUST FOLLOW BILLY JOE
Wheres the line to murder babies?
Oh, in the same line to get a g@y marriage license?
Thats what you call a "two-fer"
What a deal!
Bill O'Reilly had phone sex
Atleast it was with a woman
If you can live with murdering your own child then you dont deserve to live at all
Hypocrites!
You preach happiness to all
Disregard all law and rule!
But all opposing opinions are labeled "radical christian" or "Bush's d*ck sucking"
Those of you who call the Holy Bible a "jewish folk tale" will all rot in hell
Along with the baby murderers
Better not cry like a little baby
Thy may f*ck up and murder you as well
Theyre funny like that
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Old 01-08-2007, 12:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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There's a second part coming soon called "Burning in hell, whats that all about?"
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Old 01-08-2007, 01:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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There's a second part coming soon called "Burning in hell, whats that all about?"
Please sweet Jesus...NO!
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Old 01-08-2007, 01:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Now now he said constructive criticism only.

Which I would do if I had a month off work
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Another one of them and I'm gonna need a month off work.
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Old 01-08-2007, 01:53 PM   #7 (permalink)
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^ hehe.
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Old 01-08-2007, 01:55 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Please, constructive criticism ONLY! Any of you self-righteous liberal communists who only want to profess your g@y marriage, baby killing, anti-christian ways please spam elsewhere.



Idiocy That Eradicates

Idiocy is the word of the day
Those who follow blindly do so willingly
Denying the truth is the flow
Going with the flow is whats easy
Shall we bash christians today?
Or Republicans perhaps?
Lets check CNN to see who we should hate today
The latest Greenday album says we need to hate Bush
BILLY JOE IS GOD
MUST FOLLOW BILLY JOE
Wheres the line to murder babies?
Oh, in the same line to get a g@y marriage license?
Thats what you call a "two-fer"
What a deal!
Bill O'Reilly had phone sex
Atleast it was with a woman
If you can live with murdering your own child then you dont deserve to live at all
Hypocrites!
You preach happiness to all
Disregard all law and rule!
But all opposing opinions are labeled "radical christian" or "Bush's d*ck sucking"
Those of you who call the Holy Bible a "jewish folk tale" will all rot in hell
Along with the baby murderers
Better not cry like a little baby
Thy may f*ck up and murder you as well
Theyre funny like that
The problem here is that you're contradicting yourself. I mean, lets read between the lines here. I'm assuming you're a christian when I say this, but wouldn't "preaching happiness to all" not be a bad thing? I mean that actually is the synopsis of the new testament.

And give up the ghost of the green day rant. American Idiot was a big album, its not wrong of people who are new to music to like it, but that was forever ago and I don't think we see too many "love green day" threads anymore so you're a little dated here. Update it wil I don't know, some P!ATD stuff.

I can't imagine that any one here has had an abortion. If fact all we ever hear about is people having children, so if this is a dig at MB I'd fix it up.

*** Marrige: I know you find it gross, but I find lots of things "gross" and frankly you can't go on personal Jihad's all the time. And I don't really know what is so appauling about *** marrige, I'd have to imagine you're not privy to the inner workings of any marrige, so what you care of it is a little confusing.

Also, your rhyme scheme kind of lacks...well a scheme really and you have no phrasing to speak of. It really just reads like a man on a soap box who's never read a book before.
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Old 01-08-2007, 01:58 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I think it's awesome, can't wait for more quoting material.
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Old 01-08-2007, 01:59 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I think it tackles far too many issues, for it to do any of them justice.
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