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Old 01-18-2007, 06:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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i know its cliche and over emotional, but it was written on an emotional subject.


The lights they shine outside / yet it’s in the dark we hide.
the beacons lit for sake of hope / were burnt out lonng ago
Yes the dark is our reprieve /as we struggle through the sinews of a mind besieged by ignorance / a maladaptive will to sin / a will devoid of discipline / a will deprived of pride

Well I’m sure, your nights, feel longer
And I know, those thoughts, still linger
But this rage inside, grows stronger
And to you I say is blood really thicker?

I understand your plight / yet I fail to sympathize / when there’s no hint of fight / no tug of war / the rope is worn and slack.
They say forgiveness is a strength / yet I’m unforgivably weak / yes you’re a victim of the circumstance / tricked into the devils dance / bludgeoned by a darkened past /
Yet pity’s something I can’t hide

Well I’m sure, your nights, feel longer
And I know, those thoughts, still linger
But this rage inside, grows stronger
And to you I say is blood really thicker?
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Old 01-18-2007, 08:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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This song is about your father, leaving your mother perhaps? or the family?
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Old 01-18-2007, 08:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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very good, its about his alcoholism and the subsequent divorce, so you were pretty much bang on..
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Old 01-18-2007, 06:07 PM   #4 (permalink)
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great lyrics personal expierences make the best ideas for songs
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Old 01-18-2007, 06:35 PM   #5 (permalink)
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very good, its about his alcoholism and the subsequent divorce, so you were pretty much bang on..
i can relate.

i thought the chorus was pretty good. I can write anything for ****, even a 3 paragraph paper...so this was amazing for me.
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Old 01-18-2007, 08:33 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I like it, the lyrics were quite good.
The only thing I would say needed some attention was the replacement of backslashes for phrases.
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