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Old 02-17-2007, 06:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Exclamation Fear

Lay me down to sleep
and leave me be
For I have nothing to repay you with
There's nothing more to talk about
Now I know that you are my fear
You're the one who's bringing me nightmares
But still it seams
That I can't leave you alone

Will you be my night?
I'll be your dark.
Then I'll have something to repay you with
You'll be the one to talk about
I still know that you are my fear
You're the one who's bringing me nightmares
But still it seams
That I can't leave you alone

Can you say I'm dreaming?
Can you wake me up from this nightmare?
Don't you see I suffer
when I hear your name?

Is this darkness real?
Or its's all just part of my nightmares?
And still i fear
Why can't I leave you alone?
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Will you be my night?
I'll be your dark.
Bad especially the quoted piece, I have no idea what's going on in this there are too many questions as well.
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:46 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Night and dark are not the same. Night cannot be without dark. I am actually proud of this song
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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What? night and dark are one in the same, how can you be proud of that horror show, it's just awful. Go listen to Aiden and take notes seriously.
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:49 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Chill Loser.
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:50 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Sorry right track I had a bad day i'm a bit angry.
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:50 PM   #7 (permalink)
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^^Lol, you said chill!
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:52 PM   #8 (permalink)
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^^Lol, you said chill!
^ Fuck off loser.
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:53 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I didn't say anything.
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Old 02-17-2007, 06:53 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I'm actually surprised DC hasn't gone apeshit by now given the amount of negative crap he/she seems to be at the receiving end of. Very stoic DC seems to be.
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