Razor Meets Wrist
Razor Meets Wrist It’s such a pity That life didn’t go her way All the teenage angst built up Only to have The rug pulled from underneath Her world fell apart Emotionally battered and bruised Her parents fell victim To the reapers deadly touch Immediate family gave her the cold shoulder Labeled an outcast at school Got pushed around like a leaf When the wind gusts She comes home Kneels along side of her bed Tears begin to pour down her cheeks Yelling and pleading with god To show a sign That she belongs on this earth The once sweet little girl Turned bitter and cold She resorted to pain To fill the void in her life When the sharp steel slices Her wrist It gives her a rush Of so many emotions When the wounds form a scar It’s a tag that she’ll have for wear For weeks to come Reminding her that death Was more bare able than her own life Life didn’t go the way it should’ve She sent that message loud and clear I can only imagine what her life looked Like when it flashed before her eyes With one last cut of her wrist And one last breath She wasted away any obstacles That couldn’t have been over come When razor meets wrist It’s a combination that Unlocks an irreversible future A future that always ends up with A reading of a eulogy. Some of the events are real things that happen in my life....Granted I am not a girl but I think it makes this piece way better than if it was a guy. |
Usurp Synapse is really good.
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Sorry, but the way this is written, not diggin' it. It's so "Woe is me" And the title...man...seriously?
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Way it's written? what do you mean?
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Short lines and no punctuation. Plus how it's so "woe is me."
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Yeah sorry about the punctuation I add that at the very end, this is still a draft. As for the woe is me thing I wasn't trying for that but thanks for your advice. There is always next time :)
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I think you should carry out this whole thread. Especially the title portion.
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Hahahahaha. That was cold, man. I also didn't know you ventured round these parts.
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This reminds me of those Myspace bulletins that are like, "No girl should have to go through this." In fact, Ethan posted one on here.
http://www.musicbanter.com/hardcore-...tml#post333107 Still gives me the giggles. |
Thank you for my daily laugh.
But seriously, punctuation and better words and imagery isn't that hard. |
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Personal question, sorry if it's invasive. But do you actually cut?
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Come back Dark Circle all is forgiven
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i lol'd
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Come back Dark Circle all is forgiven. < HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
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No that's not true once or twice before I did because I just really couldn't stand somethings soo I tried it.....Other times just to see what it felt like.
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at least he can come on here and admit to it rise agae-nst, I actually had really good parents, and was close to doing the same thing, so I can say I definitely sympathize w/ it. My life's been hard enough, I can barely imagine how hard it is for others.
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Do you have food on your table? A roof over your head? Money? Parents? Are you healthy?
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Yes to all but money
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^they do send him to private school though
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When will the abuse end!?
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No my parents are most likely getting a divorce and evicted from our apartment, you try getting ****in picked on and beat up every ****in day. Don't get involved in my life.
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It's called a library computer.
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you brought that on yourself mate.
Everybody gets picked on some, you just don't know how to stand up for yourself-or be social. They pick on you cuz you wont do anything. |
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I'm sure 95% of this community have worse life issues than you. However they don't wallow in their strife, they don't let it effect them and become better people. |
Personally, I would rather have been born in this country than any other in the world. We can pretty much live long healthy lives by making good decisions, and choosing good friends, some people in other countries don't even have that option. Their lives could be taken away from them at any second, and through no fault of their own. That being said, just because you live in the U.S. doesn't automatically make your life easy. It's because there are people in our country so full of hatred, even worse than terrorists that are hellbent on inflicting pain and damage upon others, so Loser's alright in my book, because as long as he's just complaining about the sickos in our society and not becoming one of them, he's fighting the good fight. Although I have to call B.S. on the library computer thing. What library stays open 'til midnight on a Saturday night?
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Fun fact: "Wrist, Meet Razor" is a title of a Usurp Synapse song.
Usurp Synapse>>>>myspace poems |
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