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Old 03-08-2007, 06:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My Sunshine



The moonlight is sunshine to my skin
Walking around these deserted ally ways
And vacant sidewalks
Living among the drug dealers and bums
The sweet silence
Is music to my ears
It relieves all my fears
And clears my eyes of tears
Buildings soar to the skies ceiling
They seem to be taller than any giant
The stars over head stretch as far as the eye can see
The bliss full rays, the safety from there light
Makes me feel like god himself is watching over me
I can see heaven in each star
Suddenly this place doesn’t seem so dim
Suddenly this place isn’t so mysterious and undiscovered
The moonlight is still sunshine to my skin
But the stars will forever light the darkest paths.

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Old 03-08-2007, 07:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Meh, it's okay. The subject itself makes you sound like a pussy.
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Old 03-08-2007, 08:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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pretty good, a lot of good visuals, sometimes being out under the moon and the stars can very peaceful and metaphysical
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Old 03-08-2007, 08:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Meh, it's okay. The subject itself makes you sound like a pussy.
In poetry it's ok to be sensitive. Most of the old sonnets would make their authors seem like pussys by today's standards, but poetry is meant to be viewed in a different light. It's a baring of the soul, where naked honesty should be accepted.
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Old 03-09-2007, 03:40 AM   #6 (permalink)
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not bad, i like the picture it painted
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