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KRUGER 03-12-2007 02:50 PM

short burst catharsis
 
what to do when the summer seems so cold
i walk thru telephone poles hoping one will fall
crush this paper heart that was once
burned to ashes, and
punish the criminal that turned winter against us
for she is the one that coaxed my heart
and she is to be condemned in the
same fashion as i
was condemned by her.

sleepy jack 03-12-2007 02:52 PM

Dude, are you serious?

KRUGER 03-12-2007 02:55 PM

i think it saying more than it says

right-track 03-12-2007 03:24 PM

Like "shit" for instance?

Loser 03-12-2007 03:31 PM

Can you write it clearly...I don't care what it's about atleast write it clearly.

sleepy jack 03-12-2007 03:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Loser (Post 348628)
Can you write it clearly...I don't care what it's about atleast write it clearly.

Yeah.only.idiots.dont.write.clearly.right.?

Loser 03-12-2007 03:42 PM

Hey I would still be writing that way if I didn't get in trouble
I was writing in emo....God.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 03-12-2007 05:55 PM

Punish the criminal that turned winter against us < The only good line. Come back when you've outgrown sticky caps and 1337 5p33k.

KRUGER 03-12-2007 08:39 PM

you guys are tough.


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