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Old 03-12-2007, 03:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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what to do when the summer seems so cold
i walk thru telephone poles hoping one will fall
crush this paper heart that was once
burned to ashes, and
punish the criminal that turned winter against us
for she is the one that coaxed my heart
and she is to be condemned in the
same fashion as i
was condemned by her.
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Old 03-12-2007, 03:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Dude, are you serious?
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Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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Old 03-12-2007, 03:55 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i think it saying more than it says
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Old 03-12-2007, 04:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Like "shit" for instance?
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Old 03-12-2007, 04:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Can you write it clearly...I don't care what it's about atleast write it clearly.
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Old 03-12-2007, 04:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Can you write it clearly...I don't care what it's about atleast write it clearly.
Yeah.only.idiots.dont.write.clearly.right.?
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Old 03-12-2007, 04:42 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Hey I would still be writing that way if I didn't get in trouble
I was writing in emo....God.
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Old 03-12-2007, 06:55 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Punish the criminal that turned winter against us < The only good line. Come back when you've outgrown sticky caps and 1337 5p33k.
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Old 03-12-2007, 09:39 PM   #9 (permalink)
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you guys are tough.
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