Wrote this two years ago for a band i was in...

skindredluver · 03-25-2007, 10:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Crowquill

I don't like the rhyming of passes/passages because they sound too similar. Other then that its solid.

I actually like the ryhming

littleknowitall · 03-25-2007, 10:56 AM

kl

I am going to record this so you can see if not already clear how the vocal melody and rhythm of the piece are going to work, as soon as i can get the misses out of bed, so look out for it in here.

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03-25-2007, 10:56 AM	#12 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,671	kl I am going to record this so you can see if not already clear how the vocal melody and rhythm of the piece are going to work, as soon as i can get the misses out of bed, so look out for it in here.